Reviews for Go Into the Water
richie chapter 42 . 12/2/2021
honestly...kudos to you for being able to manage your time well between college and writing because if I were in your position I'd be in the middle of 20 wips and having little to no updates in stories I write. ;-;
adamyasohu chapter 41 . 11/21/2021
fucking fantastic, though I still think that your series in which percy is imperator is the absolute cream of the very impressive stories you are working on right now.
StarlightSaviour chapter 42 . 11/2/2021
Bruh this is the best fanfiction story I have ever read, the perfect bridging of the super natural and mortal world is done flawlessly. I look forward to future updates.
Fanfic reader chapter 42 . 10/24/2021
Sounds fun! Def focus on college though, a lot more important, imo post like the first 15 or so chapters (depending on how long it is) of interbellum, then post every Thursday or so like you’ve been doing for this story.
Guest chapter 42 . 10/23/2021
This is one of the best fanfiction‘s I’ve read I hope you decide to write another book
Mars Ultor chapter 42 . 10/20/2021
Sooo this probably way to late to sway you one way or the other let alone convince since I’m nothing but a filthy guest reviewer but… I honestly hope and wish that the pairing for Percy is Artemis for three reasons. Those being Artemis while I’ll tempered herself has fire enough to match Percy allowing her to keep in check and he her,secondly and arguably most minor I loved their interactions their friendship and that small hint of romance they had it it made me so dam happy! They are not perfect but they complement each other and their byplay is endearing to me. Thirdly while Percy was doing his absolute best to protect Triton’s reign this isn’t that anymore and all he is doing now is hurting himself, his brother, and even the woman he loves and while one day they might move past this it will never heal as it is the only way for it to truly heal I believe(I see their many things I don’t see I’ll admit) is for either Triton to break the betrothal and allow Artemis walk her own path wherever that leads(still rooting for PercyxArtemis) but she needs space otherwise she will break as will Percy for no matter how much a man may claim is moved on one can not ignore the heart I sadly learned that a tad late myself and while it may be petty and even foolish I can only hope that you take these foolish words of a mortal fallible man to heart sometimes you need to be selfish. I will be putting this on chapter 37 and 42 due to having one being last mentioned pairing chapter and other the most recent update huh the actually prevent from posting same review twice so I’ll add this. Great work on this story and I can’t wait to see your original work!
Mars Ultor chapter 37 . 10/20/2021
Sooo this probably way to late to sway you one way or the other let alone convince since I’m nothing but a filthy guest reviewer but… I honestly hope and wish that the pairing for Percy is Artemis for three reasons. Those being Artemis while I’ll tempered herself has fire enough to match Percy allowing her to keep in check and he her,secondly and arguably most minor I loved their interactions their friendship and that small hint of romance they had it it made me so dam happy! They are not perfect but they complement each other and their byplay is endearing to me. Thirdly while Percy was doing his absolute best to protect Triton’s reign this isn’t that anymore and all he is doing now is hurting himself, his brother, and even the woman he loves and while one day they might move past this it will never heal as it is the only way for it to truly heal I believe(I see their many things I don’t see I’ll admit) is for either Triton to break the betrothal and allow Artemis walk her own path wherever that leads(still rooting for PercyxArtemis) but she needs space otherwise she will break as will Percy for no matter how much a man may claim is moved on one can not ignore the heart I sadly learned that a tad late myself and while it may be petty and even foolish I can only hope that you take these foolish words of a mortal fallible man to heart sometimes you need to be selfish. I will be putting this on chapter 37 and 42 due to having one being last mentioned pairing chapter and other the most recent update
Guest chapter 42 . 10/18/2021
I really hope you write more, this story is amazing!
Gabi chapter 42 . 10/16/2021
Hiii! I’m an avid reader of your stories (literally obsessed with Vas Bellicosum and Filii Deorum) but i’ve never read this one, until today. I started like 3:00 a.m and just finished now at 22:45 p.m IT’S PERFECT! It is like nothing i’ve read and i love it so so much, thank you for your work! I’ll keep waiting for updates in any of stories because honestly in love with all of them! ️
And for the record, personally, i reeeally hope it’s a Percy and Reyna endgame fic
Bryan chapter 42 . 10/15/2021
When you first put aside your other works for this new story i was a bit disappointed because your other works are so good. Now that we are 40 something chapters in, I can safely say that this is maybe your best story yet, amazing stuff with action, drama, and character building. Love how you have developed your writing skills and I look forward to what you are gonna work on next!
RageSage chapter 42 . 10/16/2021
Awesome chapter, eager to read the next book!
Joe Lawyer chapter 42 . 10/14/2021
I really like this story. You've played with some of the familiar themes but crafted a story that works on it's own.

I've enjoyed Percy's characterization and your attempts at suggesting a pairing, but it's all so serious. Percy seems like the kind of guy who could really use some casual fun with some ladies rather than deep and serious relationships. At this point he may as well be a virgin for all we know.

I'm very curious to see where this goes from here and I'm looking forward to seeing Percy fully step into the role of a prince and ambassador that the whole world now acknowledges.
Joe Lawyer chapter 22 . 10/13/2021
I'm confused. Didn't one of them grab that egg ship? OR did Atlas or the Titans actually retrieve it? It seems like that thing would be useful for their off world base, though I really think some uninhabited and unclaimed island in the Pacific would be better. It'd be surrounded by Percy's natural element a and thus something he could defend pretty easily.
Joe Lawyer chapter 21 . 10/13/2021
Exactly! There are multiple treasure ships that went down during bad storms in the past several centuries that have never been found. One of those would be worth billions alone. Of course there have been several court rulings that went against the treasure finders in recent years, forcing them to give the money back to the countries they belonged to, but if Percy took care to hide the source of his funds he wouldn't be dragged into court over it.
Joe Lawyer chapter 20 . 10/13/2021
“I can also see and breathe underwater. Don’t you think I would found some things down there that could make a man rich?”

I know this was a minor point in your story and chapter, but can I say how awesome that was? I’ve read a lot of Percy Jackson fics over the years and it’s so painfully obvious yet it has never come up before. PJ in these fics often just struggles to live his life financially, never making use of his powers to make money and then to use that money to increase his chances for survival or helping other demigods. At most, maybe an author will have him use the Lotus Casino card. That’s not terribly imaginative, but it’s certainly better than nothing.

So, again, nice work on that point. I applaud the idea showing up here!
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