“I can also see and breathe underwater. Don’t you think I would found some things down there that could make a man rich?”

I know this was a minor point in your story and chapter, but can I say how awesome that was? I’ve read a lot of Percy Jackson fics over the years and it’s so painfully obvious yet it has never come up before. PJ in these fics often just struggles to live his life financially, never making use of his powers to make money and then to use that money to increase his chances for survival or helping other demigods. At most, maybe an author will have him use the Lotus Casino card. That’s not terribly imaginative, but it’s certainly better than nothing.

So, again, nice work on that point. I applaud the idea showing up here!

Wow, this is one of my favourite stories all across this site! This is my first time reviewing although I've been reading from almost the beginning, I hope I don't go to the Fields of Punishment for this lol. You have serious talent my man, love all your stories, keep up the good work! Looking forward to reading the new book in the Imperator series now! Also quick question if you don't mind, when do you plan to release the rewrite for This Means War? Love that one a lot. Just simple curiosity don't worry not asking you to fasten things up or anything. Have a good day!

Beautiful

I really enjoyed this book but I am so exited for you to get back to the filly decorum story as it is my favorite that you've written

Excellent chapter

great chapter!

Great once again!

I really enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for posting it. I love your writing and all your stories, so it doesn't really bother me on which one you update and which one you don't. I'm a hundred percent sure that your original book will be amazing, considering all your other magnificent stories that I've been following. I hope I'll be able to read that original. I know this is a bit random and not completely necessary, but I (as a writer, though not very good) enjoy knowing that people like my work (some, which are the ones who haven't seen actual good writing). Hope this put a smile on your face at the least

It doesn't matter, with what pair you do, just please build it up with planned pacing, I felt like Artemis and Percy's relationship had odd pacing that made it feel kind of odd at times, not so much to the point of being bad. I really enjoyed this story and my other message and this message is the only criticism I have at the moment, The out of field plot twists or directional turns of certain parts of the story, Artemis and Percy was really the major one and then the pacing is the only things I can point out one now. Other then that enjoyable story that I can't wait to read more. Great job and have a great day

You probably won’t read this, or care, but here goes:
I’ve followed your writing for a long time now, and have loved and anticipated every series and chapter. I already know that whatever original story you have brewing in your mind will be just as great, if not better than what you’ve written already. Please don’t be pressured to write anything, and I, for one, will read whatever you feel like posting with fervour. Take your time, and we’ll be here.

My disappointment. I really don't like this decision you've made with Artemis. This could very well put people off your story, First annabeth and now Artemis. How many times is Percy going to get cucked before you decided it was enough? Dude has had misfortune over and over without any build up, just thrown it in. It doesn't make any sense for this decision either. Last before we heard Artemis father held off and was interested in percy, to just blow that off randomly is kinda weird. Plus with the way the Artemis father sent someone for percy because of hurting her or something is also weird. This decision isn't great. Please reconsider. I say this because this decision has been randomly put together without any explanation or build up. Like why. Artemis has been with percy for sometime and then when we just get a bit of a gesture of that direction you push tritons and Artemis marriage after the build up between percy and Artemis. This was so out of field.

Excellent chapter

I saw the Brennan lee Mulligan comments when i started the story yesterday but i never thought this is what it would be! Fucking hilariou

I have been reading this story for a long time and I really love it, I can’t wait to see what happens next!

Love this story