Reviews for Go Into the Water |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You sly author, is that foreshadowing I see? Awesome chapter though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() marvelous chapter as usual.. would love the new updates when you have time to write. |
![]() ![]() I only have compliments for your stories. And to think that you are writing this while in college! That is very impressive and it is something that I cannot imagine myself doing if I were in your place. |
![]() ![]() Woo, second book done! Def focus on college more tho, time to re-read imperator again |
![]() ![]() I truly didn’t expect to hear Brennan Lee Mulligan when I read this chapter, nor am I disappointed. That was honestly the best use for that quote and I’m glad a bit of it made its way into one of my favourite authors stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the ending note of how those closest to Percy are seeing him act more like a king than a prince. Cause honestly I could see him finding and saving a long lost group, colony, or something of that sort and them crowning him king. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So when this story first dropped I wasn’t really into it. I think it had something to do with how things kept happening to Percy instead of being the one making things happen. Not to mention I perceived it as taking time away from the Imperator series, which while true, isn’t something I mind anymore, especially now that Percy is acting. Now I greatly enjoy this story and look forward to every update. My one current criticism is that you have skipped over so many of the conversations and interactions between characters. With every thing coming to a head plot-wise in a few short chapters, I understand cutting some of them. But you skipped over Perseus and Amphitrite, Triton and Amphitrite, Triton and Percy the meeting with the UN. We haven’t seen Bianca since what appears to have been a pretty successful date. It feels like character interactions are getting lost in the plot. Can’t wait to read whatever you put out next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do what you must, always remember that your mental/emotional health ARE important. They should be your priority, and you should never put those at risks if at all possible. That been said, if you must choose to focus on something outside of your personal project and college, I honestly hope that it is the Imperator saga. It's one of the best works of it's kind, and your take in both Percy and Reyna are great. I would suggest that you take the idea to put the stories on this account on Hiatus, while you finish that, and once finish, you star posting those chapters like once or twice a week. This gives you the ability to recollect opinions and suggestions for future projects, while also frees you from the stress caused by people constantly asking when the next chapter will come, and you are stressing for the next deadline. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great finisher man. Put yourself before us. Keep doing what you're doing, as long as what you're doing is what you love! Have a great day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter again, just please don’t leave it on Hiatus too long, it’s a great story please please keep writing it. Looking forward to the 3rd book even if I may or may not wait a year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a brilliant story and i loved reading it take your time on your next stories nobody will mind if you take a couple of months off to write a story |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU TOOK SOME OF THAT FROM EVAN KELMP AND IM SO HAPPY |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great end. Good job. I wonder if percy and hestia will vibe or like each other like in pjo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this series. Can't wait for you to start posting it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ayp nice |