It took me only one and a half chapters to understand the stupidity of the nonsense that the author wrote. Has the hero lived in a new world for 7 years, in a city where slavery and pedophilia are rampant, and yet he says something about innocence? Isn't that funny to you? So, living among the shit, he managed not to get dirty? How the fuck do you think life works, you idiot!?

Why is Tywin not dead. I can understand Tyrion, or the children, or Cersei since even if she was cruel she had no hand in Elia's fate. And Jamie already got what he deserved, tho he was more of a villian made by situation rather than truly evil.

But Tywin was directly involved in Elia's murder and rp, where is his vengeance?

What about the hidden clause. I hope he doesn't get forced to marry her, both because she is 10 and because it will feel bad reading it.

Tho atleast this time I have nothing against you. Sometimes story might move in direction I might not like but that's personal bias.

Keep goading your commander surely it will go well. A man with excellent martial powers and someone who was able to become commander and gain respect in the company. It's almost like Percy is hellbent on creating enemies for him first stannis(he has a assassin he could have killed him) then mountain and now tristian. I hope it's not some bs character growth plot.

Who knows though, the Mountain is still alive so he may still get his chance at redemption.
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One cliche hated trope that you have still yet to introduce will be the cockroach enemy. And I hope you don't.

And before anyone starts yappin about Perseus not being a fully adequate, goal driven MC, or ooc, the events that have been happening and will happen are all to lead Perseus to his new destiny, which is becoming the strong but wise leader that Westeros will need in order to survive the coming years that will be filled with very hard and tedious obstacles that no other player of the game could ever hope to overcome.

So trust, Perseus will have to get his shit together or risk everything falling apart.
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Your whole author note sound like excuses trying to justify the blender of the mess you created.

((There was almost nothing he wouldn't do to avenge Elia Martel's untimely demise. It was simply unfortunate that needlessly sacrificing the lives of countless people happened to be one of the few things he refused to do. ))

God bless you. People of Lys will be really happy to hear. It calms their almost half of the burning city, calms them down from the fear of the vultures that will be upon them and their future live of unwanted servitude. And we know type of servitude people of Lys be used as, a city which was know as city of whores.

Are you hellbent on making us hate Percy. Before he wouldn't even look at women but suddenly he is enchanted. Suddenly he became horndog Outta nowhere. Both tyene and Ariana. This fking feels forced as fk.

You keep changing Percy's character as if it is some cloth to wear. It would be okay if those characteristics were just different after all people do have more than one characteristic. But you are making him have characteristic that is direct opposite to his previous character. Is he fking bipolar, No! Even that won't be able to explain it. Does he have multiple personalities?

And don't force bs excuse like remade or awakened or some bs. I am tired of this shit.

He could get some sea dragon

This is where I will stop reading. You keep changing percy whenever you want, as if you dont even know yourself who percy is.

First he is only percy in name only but atleast that was explained by that he "remade".

Second after burning lys he started the fight for betterment of all and not only for his family security but suddenly he forgot like wtf. And willas has to remind him of that, its like how can you forget about your ideal that make you pick arm. You can forsake you ideal ofc but how can you mf forget about it.

Third then he suddenly became misogynist despite coming from modern age and his familiar with female warriors. Infact he has faught beside them.

But the final nail in the coffin was this. The only core about Percy that remain constant till here was that he is obsessed with his family security. Infact he is super paranoid about it that it is way past simple obsession. But suddenly he agrees for the hostage agreement bruh

And tho I am not gonna read it after this. I hope it wasn't danny because that will be madness.

Why treat margaery like that?

While it suits your percy to act like that, still felt for her. Tho that will prolly be because we have access to her pov

Wasnt Percy readon for coming and joining the war was for betterment of all people. Isnt that what he decided after he burnt down Lys. The 'remade' bs aint gonna cover these things anymore. I can understand his characteristics changed(still flimsy excuse imo) and he became slightly cruel(or highly depending on situation) because he was "remade". But him just going back on what he decided(he decided after he was "remadeor becoming slightly misogynist to Danny despite coming from modern age. I dunno where are you going with percy...

What is with dany being a good wife, learn sewing and shit and not to learn swords. I thought Percy was from modern age. And not only modern age, but from camp blood where there were powerful women fighter let alone the hunteress and godls like athena and artemis.

So jon and tyrion can possibly be demigod.

The tristian was so rushed, and tbh I totally liked what you did. This tristian x dany shit was do awful to read, and not because I would have minded her with tristian. What I hated was the triangle thing they had going. So I am happy that it got cleared.

But it was so rushed, its like you are washing your hands off because so many people complained.

Ohh tyrion is a demogod?