Reviews for A Hero's Journey |
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![]() ![]() New chapter when lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() We're is the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ey! it's almost time to upload the chapter don't forget |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good! Got me curious. Wish they would add this in the anime, Team 7 visiting the past. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you do one chapter per arc i imagine how big is gonna be the WAR arc LIKE... It lasted 200 eps... ALSO Are you including fillers? Or are you gonna Just include the funny ones like Naruto clone dream or Naruto impostor |
![]() ![]() ![]() looks very good but what is the chapter upload schedule |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for letting us know! Good luck writing and I look forward to see the new chapters! ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo! that's is way WAY to long |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Make sure to delete this when you update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Feb 7th is too long ~ |
![]() ![]() Naruto multiverse dragón Ball multiverse please |
![]() ![]() ![]() por favor sube pronto el siguiente capítulo _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the fact that you do one chapter per arc. Now, I'm gonna ask you nicely to not include fillers next time. Not because I don't like it, but honestly, if you do this, your never gonna end this fic. In another note; c'mon dude! Final stretch, only one more arc and you will accomplish what few did, if any, and that is, a "Watch the show" fic that actually covers all the story pre-time skip! You said before that you wanted to do it before new years. You can do it! I know you can! An a side note, I really wish you focussed more in showing how Naruto went from liking Sakura to loving her, and how it broke him how obsessed she was with Sasuke. I still remember his broken look when he made her the promise of a life time, when he finally realized that she would never feel the same for him, and yet he continued to love her until he fulfilled his promise and got Sasuke back. How there was no closure, how he accepted that she didn't want to be with him but with Sasuke. You have to make emphasis on this, since it was one of the things that pained Naruto the most. Bringing back the guy that was hurting the girl he loved, and her not hesitating in choosing the guy that tried to kill her. I know that with time he made his peace with it. But during the end of the pre-time skip and during the whole Shippuden it was something that affected him and he never shared it with anyone. He came to gripes at the reality that Sakura would only be happy with Sasuke and Sasuke would only accept Sakura, if only out of her stubbornness alone. It may not be be a popular opinion for NaruHina and SasuSaku fans. But Naruto's care for Sakura beyond just as friends was a big part of the story. And it would be interesting seeing Sarada's reaction to seeing her idol being there for everything for her mom, and her dad trying to kill her (bordering not really caring about her existence) while having that conflict of heart of comparing the man her dad is he is with the man he was. Boruto too, having to accept that her mom didn't interact with Naruto enough for him to realize her feelings until she practically threw herself to pain to save him while confessing, and that that was not even enough for him to go with her, since Naruto knew that he wouldn't be able to move on while he still hadn't bringed back Sasuke and still loved Sakura. Though this is only my opinion, as I think it would be entertaining to see how their parents connections really were, and that it was not "Since childhood I only loved one person and only one, yeah he/she loved me too and no one else ever loved me" stuff. I can't only wait to see when Sarada's remember how Kushina asked to find a girl like her, and for Sarada to realize that Kushina and Sakura have the same trope of being "A girl/woman with temperament", or when Sakura confessed to Naruto, trying to use his feelings to stop him from fighting Sasuke. Or in the 4th war when Minato asks if Sakura is his girlfriend and he says "Yeah, something like that!" and Sakura actually not denying it, just getting violent. Though all of this is in the future and if you don't drop the fic. Wish you the best and happy new year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update :) |