Reviews for A Hero's Journey
Guest chapter 16 . 9/18/2024
Where's the I'm a super pervert lines? Bad translation? He definitely doesn't say he's a "big one". Come to think of it didn't the bridge builder also use the word super a bit originally.

I miss the time before crunchyroll became a thing and ruined shit for all the anime lovers.

I'm fairly damn sure Jaraiya didn't tell Naruto he has a tight and sexy body. Wtf translation is that.

Fairly sure unlike what so many said its a boiler like room rather than sewer. Not sure though.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/17/2024
So many interesting reactions that could be. Facing Gaara. The various Naruto vs Sasuke fights. Orochinaru encounters, Pein and the destruction of the village. However they'd only see the aftermath since Naruto only arrives after the large city is cratered. The massive role he has in the war, kaguya, and again Sasuke. Fighting on the moon.

All the people he helped on his missions. Oh well.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/17/2024
Boruto repeatedly calling his dad an idiot and moron is starting to tick me off. Casually ignoring him literally raising himself and insulting him over and over.

The others are too but not as much.

Kakashi didn't make a hundred shadow clones while running on fumes.

Nor did Naruto make a thousand against Mitsuki

Would like to see their reactions to things I know this story doesn't get to. It mentions Sasuke defecting several times but there's also Sasuke trying to kill Sakura at least twice. One of them Naruto saves her and I think it was Kakashi or Yamamoto for the other I recall.

Sakura obsessing over Sasuke for as long and to the degree eventually became so damned forced. If not for all the complaints since its directed more at kids id frankly not be surprised if Naruto would've ended up with Hinata and Sakura in the end potentially.

Its almost like Naruto was being edited from what actually happened in forcing her with Sasuke and forcing Boruto to be the hero as they shit on Naruto in the second series. Especially with Sarada looking like she is Karins daughter who the asshole actually did skewer though not cut down.
Guest chapter 10 . 9/17/2024
Thats a mistake at the beginning. Mitsuki says Haku didn't kill Zabuza. How does he know that? Kakashi checked Zabuzas pulse and said he has no heartbeat so he should appear dead.

Its fine to say he could still be alive but he acted as though he was stating a fact and Kakashi never checked.

Three tomoe not two.

They're so sure just because Kakashi said the hunter nin who was covered up and masked was a guy that he is. With zero confusion if he was wrong or assuming after seeing Haku.

Wasn't Naruto supposed to blow up at Inari and pass out burning off his anger only to be found by Haku? Maybe not.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/17/2024
Aww.. the part where Tora breaks free running off and Hiruzen adds catching Tora to the list mid read was left out. That has yet to not be amusing to me.

Water Vortex instead of Dragon?

Not bad. Only mistake really noticeable is them not noticing the other shuriken in the shadow. They shouldn't of been behind him, meaning they should've seen both clearly from the side.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/17/2024
Ah. Right. That scene didn't happen yet.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/17/2024
Ah right. Sarada didn't get to see her mom and Ino fighting eachother over being next to Sasuke or Naruto and his heart breaking first kiss.

Nor did they see him getting hit a bunch.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/17/2024
Very well done. Two or three sentences that get repeated a bit much in the story is about the only complaint I can come up with.

A thousand clones though? Think that's rather high balling it. Amusing regardless.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/17/2024
Good btw but reading its only a memory so many times is getting to be a bit much.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/17/2024
So the scene with Naruto coming back and the kids shocked and blowing him off. Then Naruto dropping the kunai where they abandoned him and walking home depressed from nearly being murdered for nothing didn't happen.

Don't understand why with the other scenes being a thing.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/17/2024
Missed Naruto first meeting Sakura and making her feel better before Ino and the girls call her over. I think she had been made fun of over her forehead. Then after being told to avoid him does so when she sees him again. While he from then on chases after that false hope he had of being close to the cute girl with the beautiful cherry blossom hair who talked and smiled at him happily.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/17/2024
It was perfect till that bizarre shadow clone addition.

Fairly sure he's older than 3 at both the Ichirakus and that part as well. Definitely that part.
caskette4 chapter 24 . 8/10/2024
Hey tot any inspiration so faf
Kage-kitsune9001 chapter 15 . 8/1/2024
Well Sarada, compared to the previous generations, it is easy. Your forest of death test was people acting as hurt shinobi with check points. It was on baby mode compared to what the others did. It must be interesting watching younger versions of the people you know fighting to kill. Thats what happens when things are too peaceful. I do feel bad for Boruto. Seeing the fight where his mother got beat up. Glad they got front row seats to the Garra vs Lee fight. So it seems that Boruto has read the DBZ manga. More and more you CHILDREN are seeing how easy things are. The fact that you are seeing all this blodd and mayhem and you're asking how these people can be shinboi tells me that you KNOW NOTHING.
Kage-kitsune9001 chapter 14 . 8/1/2024
I like the fact that it answers how they could still see the fight since Naruto was supposed to be unconscious after Orochimaru put the seal on him. The scene where Sasuke pulls the guys arms out of its socket is what I was waiting for. I'm enjoying seeing more of how they are understanding that they have it easy.
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