The fact that you start from Naruto's birth makes me enjoy this more than I would thought. Great job on your writing and the pace of the it up. Looking forward for more.

For chapter three, you should show first Jiji-Hokage finding Naruto with the dead 4th and Kushina, followed by a timeskip to Naruto protecting Hinata from bullies and Naruto joining the Shinobi academy

Also here’s a thought, allow Team Konohamaru to hear all of Naruto’s thoughts and also enter his mindscape whenever he was in the mindscape, as well as hear the Kyuubi’s voice when he tries to corrupt Naruto during dreams Naruto might have had as a kid and when he’s a shinobi.

Also... since Kurama isn’t Naruto but sealed in him, would Kurama also be watching the memories with Team Konohamaru, but is hiding for now so he doesn’t scare the genin? Or like Naruto, he was put into an unknown location you sent Naruto to, unknowing of the memory intruders?(I like to think Kurama is with them since Kurama has the power to sense emotions, mostly negative but still, it means he would’ve sensed Boruto and his teammates snooping and kept an eye on them, if he wasn’t thinking something like “meh, no big deal, let them use the scroll.”)

this made me cry how could you ಥ‿ಥ
this was an amazing chapter I can't wait for the next one!

I wanted to cry with this story.

This was good! But to make the memory stand out more, maybe but that in italics? It’ll be easier to follow it going back and forth

Congratulations! You just made me cry!

cant wait for more

Interesting story keep up the great work:)

I wouldn’t much seeing everything that boruto and his teammates look at.
Also I got some suggestion OS NARUTO: 101, 136-157, 159-160, 175-177, 185, 186, 192, 193, 197-201, 203-207, 213-220
Shippuden: (maybe) 54-72, 176-183, 186-189, 191-196, 271, 306, 311, 349-361, (again maybe) 394-413, 469, 480-483.
But for the most I’m interested in this idea.

Cover everything in your plan! I want to see everything?

cute Boruto

Nice chapter

wah~ I love chikara arc uwu your story is amazing. I'll start to reading English Stories but the FF app translate for me -w-

is very sad if I don't translate the commentsu because I'll have write the comment and my English isn't good :c

please, can you give we a new chapter? Tanks for read and see you! uwu

Well, this is a pretty good start! I wonder how things are gonna go!

I know Sarada's not gonna be happy about what her dad did, though. :(

I’d love to see how Team Konohamaru would react to the Boruto: Naruto Next Generations: Timeslip arc

Also, think you could do the Naruto movies(like the land of winter/spring movie idk the name)