Reviews for Highschool DxD:A Minor Tale |
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![]() ![]() ![]() was there doctors and nurses 400 years back ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so i have been reading this for a bit and honestly i am kinda bothered by something. Pierce was methodical wnd logical and worked hard. But the second he learned he was in DxD he completely lost all logic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol late comment I'm just reading this now saw your comment about someone complaining about you giving pierce chi being too much, how tho like I've literally never read another fanfiction where the mc start out with less I mean acessible by any being in any universe that use the concept of lifeforce energies, so it's really not that big of boon. tbh if anything I'm litlle disappointed on how little you gave him I mean most holy swords outside of the high tier ones like durandal and excalibur don't do much or you could of given him a low tier sacred gear like sword birth or blade blacksmith and that'd still be under his own power as it be for him to master it and his imagination for the effects, instead you have using a regular sword which is honestly unrealistic on it's own as an average sword usually only last 20 yrs or so at most thats in real life with humans with non enhanced strength or durability, the way pierce using it, it would broken after the tyrant and the basilisk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Booob wheres the lemon |
![]() ![]() Dude update this soon like this |
![]() ![]() ![]() You really didn't look all that much into how people lived 400 years ago did you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just wish that new chapter will release |
![]() ![]() ![]() This keeps getting better |
![]() ![]() ![]() man what can i say but this is great |
![]() ![]() ![]() The zeth arc is forever |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully you are well my guy, your story has been a wonderful read and I utmost enjoyed it, hopefully you are well and come back soon for a chapter update |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I hate it when the MC feels guilty about shit completely out of their control, like they willingly killed the previous owner of the body or something. For all he knows, he IS the original owner of that body and merely regained his past life's memories! Immediately jumping to the conclusion that he 'killed' the original owner of the body is absolutely absurd. It's like Authors just enjoy guilt tripping their MCs for the added drama. |
![]() ![]() I just reread this recently and I hope that A/N is new! Looking forward to whatever comes next |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuck I was enjoying this without a harem |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find it weird how most reincarnation fanfics have the MC remembering their past life as soon as they are born. It's a newly developed brain, and they would be experiencing high overstimulation from all the new senses that the brain is processing. They would not have the mental capacity to think in that sense, and even then, the memories should come in patches over a periodic time frame. |