really interesting work

Great chapter.

Naruto's dream of the war against Zygerrians on Earth again.

Kurama's thoughts on seeing Terran and everyone lived in it with different cultures and habits. He thinks the terran young generations teenagers are spoiled brats few of them.

Mos Espa become a stronghold of the Ölüm Partisans on Tatooione.

Temari learned about Naruto's heroic deeds and lives he saved.

The Senate can't be serious about Ölüm survivors as terrorists.

Well shit looks things are about to escalate
The flashback scene was interesting
Mutani losing his tribe was heartbreaking and sad though it looks a certain organization is on the planet
The conversation with jiraiya and lady Chiyo was cool and good
Though it looks like the clone wars are about to kick off
Looking forward to the next chapter-crnlonewolf3195

Interesting twist. Will Olum survive this and come back stronger to establish themselves, or will they die and Naruto be left as a wandering and wanted criminal? Just like he is with Konoha.

Hmm, seems Naruto's life might become more difficult soon anyways keep up the gerat work!

Awesome chapter! I love how you had Mos Espa is a stronghold of the Ölüm Partisans. I also love how you had the local merchants, travelers, moist farmers, slaves, and Jawas were in awe and fear at what Naruto represented. I'm not sure how to feel about Naruto and his companions turn a blind eye to the Hutts' main source of income: the local slave trade. Will Shmi Skywalker survive her encounter with the Tusken Raiders? Will Naruto become a Gray Jedi in the future? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want.

Anyway, awesome chapter and keep up the great work!

How long is it gonna build up till the zygerians are wiped out or permanently crippled along with the hutts

Why was Naruto declared a deserter by Konoha?
And are we ever gonna find out what Naruto found and recovered in the ruins of the Uzumaki Village?

wow that ending! i can see this going all bad! three way possible four way war. olum with lots of underground possible open support vs the Republic vs the trade federation vs the slavers.
sidenote I'm guessing it's going to be olum vs Republic with lots of planets leaving the Republic due to olum being labeled terrorists. then some time later after both sides have suffered a fair amount trade federation comes smashing in.
also what stance do the Jedi take with all this?
because they have utterly failed at peace keeping.
couldn't jango just request for kamino to create clones to support olum ?
hope for more soon
cheers!

dammit. why do you have to leave it there

I loved it, good chapter.

Things are about to get more complicated, luckily Naruto is not alone, he has allies he can trust.

Fools

Yeah so against my better judgement I decided to check out this update given the stuff I have heard from multiple sources regarding it and what has happened in it...this is just painfully bad

You have a large amount of grammar mistakes that are blatant and at times glaringly breaking the chapters flow.

You still don't seem to fundamentally understand Star Wars or the Star Wars Universe in general.

Naruto and his "Resistance Group" are ridiculous and in fact MASSIVE hypocrites...Their whole thing is FIGHTING Slavery...Yet have no problem with turning a blind eye to it so long as it benefits them. Case in point with having them be based on Tatooine, and making a deal with the Hutts to turn a blind eye and not interfere with their slavery business/practice in exchange for a place to hide.

That in of itself seems like a story decision made solely to have them be on Tatooine which doesn't make sense as there are countless other planets that they could use as a place to hide out. Planets that would not only not require them to disrespect the foundation of their whole resistance movement, but also from a military and strategtic standpoint be vastly superior.

To be honest I am willing to wager that the only reason they are on Tatooine is so that you can insert some kind of Real-World Events/Politics crap in like you have done in past stories...It's also very clear that you are completely failing to understand how Tusken Raiders are as a species and culture.

The funniest thing though is that realistically the Senate would be right to label the "Olum Survivors" as a Terrorist Organization as that's what they are...They are not sanctioned by a governing body...They commit acts of war against other species/spread chaos and terror...They are Terrorists.

Though one thing is for sure...If this leads to the Olum fighters fighting the clone troopers than they are screwed as there is NO WAY IN ANY UNIVERSE that they would be able to beat the Clone Troopers who are VASTLY SUPERIOR, and VASTLY BETTER TRAINED, EQUIPPED, AND ORGANIZED than the Olum Fighters

0-0 what?!

Wow, hopefully this'll get them to start thinking that something is wrong if true freedom fighters are being called terrorists even though they are only targeting slavers and the like.