you have just made my day and made my wife laugh at me for geeking out when I read the car

Este largo esta bien , para capitulos mas densos de mas accion puedes aumentar la longitud animo

Creo que el capitulo tiene potencial, pero esperare a ver como sigue la historia

love it

EXCELLENT WORK

Hi there

Ouch, the older brother really had to ruin a calm, romantic scene after some heartfelt revelations.

Keep up the great writing and stay safe!

gran capitulo
continua por favor

Heh, Hego ruined the moment.

Great chapter, and yeah, while Shego killing the survivors wasn't exactly heroic, she certainly wouldn't be judged considering how they tortured her for weeks.

Keep the good writing.

Awsome backstory on Shego, also I love Ron and Bonnie relationship and I like Ron care about Shego, Ron is lucky having two woman his girlfriends.

Should probably have Ron start saying Sheila’s real name more

Pfff, Ron’s parents are such some jerks… But on the other hand, I must admit that will be kinda weird to see his own son going out with two (gorgeous) girls at the same time.

Just catched up saying it was better than I expected is an understatement, though some scene were just kinda off imo.

Hi there

A pity that his parents did not give the girls a chance, but having too at the same time is overwhelming as parents, but still...

Keep up the great writing and stay safe!

muy bien buen capitulo
los padres de Ron son idiotas

Cool update, and yeah, Ron isn't letting anyone walk over him again. His parents certainly have no right to complain considering they pretty much stopped raising him a long time ago.

Keep the good writing.