It strains SoD that she would be so stupid as to not even ask who Schneider would call before he did so.

It also feels like a big defeat to join Faultline, it kinda feels like this was exactly what Faultline was waiting for. That Amy would get in trouble so Faultline ould negotiate for more, such as having her join outright.

who's fault - whose fault

A proofreader wouldn't be a bad idea.

Tt - It

to healing - to heal

This reads like a forum fic, since it's mostly those guys who has such an inflated opinion about the importance of online forums.

I would recommend just cutting it out, most canon characters had better things to do than spend time in a forum.

This is really good

This is a really neat idea! I really enjoyed this so far.

Pretty nice idea! I kinda wish you'd go a bit slower in development and i really question why you decided to confide to amy this quickly.
Feels a bit like a fix-fic to me, but you kame it work for now so it's cool.

Panpan and jade should give each other tune ups

keepgoin

Interesting scene and chapter!

Interesting take on time travel in Worm. Looking forward to more and keep up the good work!

Hmmmmmm great

Thank you for the story, it is quite interesting and I would be happy to see more when you are ready to post again.

Seems like author fiat tbh