Reviews for Perilous Approach
Dark chapter 2 . 12/24/2019
I love the idea . Good start but your writing needs more details and the chapters are very short. I am loving this though. Good job and please continue.
Dark chapter 1 . 12/24/2019
I’m interested!
1silentreader1 chapter 2 . 12/24/2019
love the plot so far! Just some advice: I feel like u use the verbs 'Whisper' and 'he/she sighed' and once or twice, you writehe laughed 'speech speech speech' he chuckled'. this doesnt happen often but the second verb isnt needed. Other than that, I really like it! Cant wait for more