I can’t believe how crazy the amount of faves and follows you have but the simultaneous low review count. I enjoyed this chapter for how you are showing that Harry is constantly trying to better himself and how he is showing his independence constantly. What threw me off the most was his lack of reaction to killing. I am used to authors usually doing the whole throw up and have a talk before accepting themselves kind of deal but you skipped that entirely. I approve but I would have liked for Harry to have a brief internal conflict or a sense of uncomfortably that before he shook it off. As it is now, he seems to equate his real experiences to his Shadowrun experiences too easily and always to his benefit, meaning he seems entirely ok with actually doing things like killing, manipulating, and stealing with his only prior experience being in a fictional sense.

When I was a dishwasher, for 3 years, I learned a lot about human greed. Our supervisor, who was the main waitress, forbid the cooks and other wait staff from sharing tips or from putting out a tip jar. On punishment of write-ups, of which 3 meant automatic termination. I can count on one hand the times a cook risked their job to share their tips with me, and I was grateful every time, no matter how small the amount was.
For reference, when a cook didn't have a tip jar out, the rips totaled less than $20, usually from less than 5 people total. In contrast, that number jumped to over $200 with the same cook, the very next day, and the same people coming in to eat, if there was a tip jar. (hotel restaurant, you see) The only other change was our supervisor not working that day. I Think that's quite telling.
My mother, who worked at the same restaurant some seven years before, with the same supervisor, as a waitress, got to see firsthand how that supervisor discriminated against people who looked poorer. The supervisor was short, almost rude with them, when she spent a good deal of time being nice to the wealthy and giving them near-constant attention. While the supervisor never shared tips with the cook and dishwasher, my mother always made sure she split it equally with them, even making sure that any other wait staff who happened to be working at the time got an equal share. Not that it was ever busy enough to warrant more than 1 wait staff very often; though she never gave the same consideration to the supervisor due to their behavior.
I kept my head down because I needed the job, so I never questioned it at the time, but nowadays it really gets to me how greedy it all was.
Nowadays, I am of the opinion that the whole tipping thing should be abolished if it encourages behavior like that. We should all be played properly for the quality of our work, not just for how nice we are to the wealthier-looking people.
Anyways, sorry for my rant. I really enjoyed this chapter and how events taught Liv a healthy perspective on money.

Buena seguimiento de la historia ya quiero leer el próximo capitulo

Really love your work, but I'm mad about one thing. When I worked as a dishwasher myself, I did not get any tips at all. So now I'm mad at my own experience of being a dishwasher.

I honestly don't liek the cold blood murder at all :( I really don't think it suits his personnality.. Hope the next chapter will be better, keep up the good work

That was a great start and I look forward to future chapters. I admit, I will definitely see a pattern if a gentleman of Scandinavian background named Matthew Helm shows up (granted, if he was the original, he would be in his late-60's/early-70's at the time of the story but the original is ornery enough to hang around).

I wonder if he's going to spend his remaining off hours in the US dealing with sex traffickers; that could make an interesting hobby.

'Twill be most interesting to see what he finds when he investigates that interesting pattern he's observing at the gun show.

WoW Amazing christmas gift :D, you history is somthing new and i love it, the first part was one of the best fanfics that i has read, i cant wait for read Book 2

Excellent.

Can you remind me of how the dragon in a girls body came about again

great chapter. though if you are going to use the hogwarts colors for the dice would it not make more sense to use green for the book that holds chamber of secrets? or am i just a stupid reviewer who is over thinking the cover art?

Merry Christmas. The perfect gift. I've been craving more of this story since I finished the first one.

I'm vaguely surprised at him working minimum wage. I would have expected him to try to be more efficient with his time, doing something more productive while converting some gold to cash.

And a Merry Christmas to you as well!

Good one

Excellent, glad to see this back. Keep up the good work lad and Merry Christmas.

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