Great fic with great characterization for Jaune, Blake and Qrow. Overall, its pretty good but i much rather have the relationship thingy toned down because of their ages. Other than that? Yeah its great. Cant wait to see how Teal is going to be relevant too

Please update this, cant wait to see what you have in store

Bit of an inconsistency here. A couple of chapters back, Jaune says that his father was the only huntsman in his town. Now he's saying that there are "a lot of huntsman families that live out there," which doesn't make sense with what was previously said.

The outfit seems kinda cringe; not that ever going that deep into outfit descriptions is ever not.

Anyhow, rest of the chapter was decent.

Hah, and I had thought the last chapter was too sweet; this one was tooth-rotting.

Pretty fluffy chapter. I enjoyed it.

This whole spiel on faunus-human relations is just plain obnoxious. That said, I liked the bit where they killed themselves; not many stories take their fanaticism in that direction, so it was rather unique.

And on a different note: Ozpin is rather... manipulative, isn't he?

As soon as I read the word railgun, I knew the world was doomed XD

Arthur started a new game, and Qrow appeared in the Beacon earlier

Cardin being racist and asshole as usual

Wow, Arthur has distant family (or is it his brother?)

Jaune's semblance is something of the OP in terms of information, so I think it suits him the strategic and tactical type

Jaune can now hack anything, lol

Watch out Penny, Arthur, and anyone who relies on technology!

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I’m glad I read this.

I think It would be cool to give him some more physical training. to match his mental abilities.