| Reviews for Jaune in the Machine |
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   kohe11333 chapter 3 . 8/20/2020 nice man hope to see more |
| Poor Mans Revie chapter 3 . 8/11/2020 Hey! I hope you haven’t forgotten this! I know that corona may be a pain. I just hope that this fic won’t die. It’s too good! |
| JdkLeBleau728 chapter 3 . 7/6/2020 Here is an obligatory review to motivate you! I read this once before, but since it was only one chapter, I didn't put much thought into it. But it seems like I'll be paying attention now. |
| Starlord Master chapter 3 . 6/13/2020 Dang! Happy June! |
| Starlord Master chapter 2 . 6/13/2020 Well done. |
| Starlord Master chapter 1 . 6/13/2020 Cool. |
| Snappy Flowah chapter 3 . 6/12/2020 Heeeeeeck Yeaaahhhhhhhh! This kind o' Jaune is mah thing! His power has the potential to either make or break humanity's future! What next!? Jaune making an AI smarter than him? Haha! I'm looking forward to seeing more! Hnnngggggg!.!.! I can't waaaaiiiiiiiit!.! ~Snappy~ |
| Tetho chapter 3 . 6/12/2020 Goddanggit, I hope you don't drop this. This is sooo fucking interesting and very engaging plus Jaune could do a lot of good with his Semblance on wherein he can make a database of known criminals, terrorists, rogue hunters, corrupt officials, etc. At the same time try to increase the CCT network security whilst making his own secret backdoor. |
| Harbinger Of The Void chapter 3 . 6/11/2020 Is it a coincidence that the technician's last name is Watts? |
| iceprince23 chapter 3 . 6/11/2020 mke glynda dont be sohard on jaune and let ozpin explain glynda why he wants to monitor jaune i think that will nice to not come to misandastarding |
| Just That Fanboy Guy chapter 3 . 6/10/2020 This is a pretty interesting story so far. Jaune is a bit ooc for my taste, but not as much as some have him be. I like the concept and am interested to see more. I don’t see why Ozpin made Ruby the leader though. Jaune was the one who actually made the plan to beat the nevermore. I don’t know, just a weird choice I think. |
| MrRayney chapter 1 . 6/10/2020 Just a moment... A Jaune who is not an edgy lord, in this case intelligent but still a socially uncomfortable boy with a big heart. Okay An interesting and powerful semblance, but that does not enter the OP immediately. Yes Truly human and not forced interactions. Yes! LANCASTER ! YES! I am fully on board in this story. |
| NeverNotWriting chapter 3 . 6/10/2020 Great chapter! I do have one question, I understand that this is a Jaune x Ruby story. But with Jaune having technology manipulation as a semblance and how he seems to enjoy computers, wouldn’t it make a little more sense for this story to be Jaune x Penny? Just my thoughts |
| XxDashiexX chapter 1 . 6/10/2020 atleast jaune didn't sniff wierd experimental internet gas |
| BlueCore chapter 3 . 6/10/2020 Things are getting good, can't wait for the next chapter. |