Reviews for Jaune in the Machine
DMJB chapter 3 . 4/19/2021
I genuinely don't understand why Team RAYB is being led by Ruby within the context of this story.
EliteShadow chapter 12 . 3/21/2021
love this story so far please keep up the great work would love to read more soon!

keep on writing!
Guest chapter 12 . 2/27/2021
Nice chapter
You may need to check for typos and syntax mistakes
You use there instead their for some statements
Pally111 chapter 12 . 2/23/2021
Read all your chapters in one go, fell very inlove with your fanfic. This and your konosuba one are top notch! Love this! Cant wait to see more!
AscendedHumanity chapter 12 . 2/21/2021
Would be interesting to get interludes of experience with the Grimmdex, like people using it in the field or other things
Blaze1992 chapter 12 . 2/20/2021
This is a interesting take on the series and I find the power you gave him to be real useful, and the whole grimmdex thing is also fun to see.
DaDragon562 chapter 12 . 2/20/2021
Great updates now let’s get back to more plot advancement!
Dethcat chapter 12 . 2/20/2021
Lmao I’m just imagining the entire huntsman community and Remnant bullying Jaune into getting a Patreon

The last role should comedically, and yet still entirely true, be “Peter Port” —Have 1000 info-Points reach confirmed or 10 new Grimm species confirmed

Alastair Al'Aran I bet is a reference to Coeur
Argus456 chapter 12 . 2/20/2021
While it's really late for a Christmas chapter, I did enjoy it especially with the humor, even the raunchier omes, those got a good chuckle out of me.

So Jaune's rich now...probably not on Schnee level but given how useful it is to others, I doubt Jaune cares all too much about his income. Though if he ever needs or just wants something, he can just buy it.

Also, I do enjoy how you're using dishwasher's art as a reference to Jaune's new look. Will the 'sheath' be part of the outfit down the line? Or will you modify it into something to supplement his semblance?
Dethcat chapter 9 . 2/20/2021
Hot damn, mass suicide and Jaune’s already been inducted into the Ozluminati?
Dethcat chapter 8 . 2/20/2021
YO JAUNE AND PENNY JUST WENT SUPER SAIYAN! Penny later be like “With Jaune’s help, I was operating at 1000% my normal abilities!”
Dethcat chapter 7 . 2/19/2021
Jaune and Penny just became a coalescent being, that’s hilarious and awesome! You know, that was probably an amazing experience for Penny to have an entire human life flash before her eyes. Before she only had the internet to base her experiences off of, but now through Jaune she has technically lived 17 or so years considering human memory isn’t perfect. So for her, in but a few seconds she’s become exponentially more human than before
Dethcat chapter 5 . 2/19/2021
I think it would be amusing as hell if Jaune occasionally forgets that most people’s heads aren’t like a computer, as his became due to his semblance, and will occasionally rattle off information to impossible degrees. Like “Oh it’s 6:43:253am” or saying something to nano-level or giving the exact location of Roman Torchwick in Vale, the number of safe houses he has, and how many sects of the White Fang are involved in Vale. Also the exact name and personal information of every member. Stuff that one could reasonably hack into on the internet, and stuff Jaune just casually responds to questions with because he forgets to filter information before speaking it. Or with the bunk beds “Oh sure they look precarious but each can support exactly 226.796 kilograms before experiencing failure”

Goddamn Jaune’s semblance is insanely overpowered in an era of technology. He basically became a god when he fused with HighThought

Also adding in Qrow, very nice
Uber Ghidorah chapter 12 . 2/19/2021
Personally, I would have said "Nondescript Winter Holiday" instead of Christmas, but this is good too.
SentinalSlice chapter 12 . 2/19/2021
Honestly when I reached the part about the grimmdex I thought I had reached an author’s note and the end of the chapter. Because the first thing I saw was “fixed line spacing” I thought: oh, I guess this was a short chapter and you had to edit some of the previous chapters. To be honest, I wouldn’t call this an interlude. For one, people tend to skip interlude chapters, and two: this felt like an actual chapter and not an interlude.
I look forward to seeing what Jaune uses the donation money for. Maybe building his own lab or something, or upgrading all his weapons. I don’t know?
Anyway, please keep up the great work!
And stay healthy too!
I’m glad to see an update after so long!
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