Reviews for Jaune in the Machine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() An author name Alistar Al'Aran. Hmm that sounds familiar, I wonder why. Good chapter though and good to see you back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of my favorite parts about christmas is every so often when my mom is handed a present she'll get this dumb elated look on her face and loadly proclaim "just what i always wanted...what is it?" i guess it was something her dad used to do and she started doing after he passed and I've started doing it now too. It always makes me chuckle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter here late Xmas special was neat also Villians planing Jaune and Blake meeting Tai all very nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, atkeast you're back. Good chapter as always, definitly a Christmas Chapter. Welcome back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thay signature is from co Armour isnt itthe other fanfic author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my, this is basically every developer's dream ever and that semblance... Oh my...! Please do continue, I don't think I've ever read of RWBY fanfiction focused on tech :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() At least they’re having fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally it was worth the wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It felt somewhat rushed, but that's ok.. I'm enjoying the Fic so far. So I hope you continue to update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting choice of Semblance! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update more. This is super good. |
![]() ![]() My heart exploded. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() Wow its really cool |
![]() ![]() Enough fluff, where is the technobabble? I require cool tech speak |