Reviews for Jaune in the Machine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() One the one hand, hell yeah adorable! On the other, whatever lingering hope of JauneXPenny i had is slowly fading away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's a nice and interesting story. Looking forward to the rest. Also I was internally cooing during the last chapter, it was too cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!.!.!.! Soooo Cuuuuuuuttteeeeeee!.!.!.!.! XDDDDDDDDDD ~Snappy~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Lancaster here is just sweet and cute! God thanks to this chapter I already want to see them together together. However here my favorite character in this interlude is Yang, I like the overprotective Yang but she gets a bit boring over time. Seeing a Yang more open to the idea that her sister is in a relationship is pleasant, because as she says she will not always be by Ruby's side. Seeing her accept Jaune as part of the family is something sweet, we already have Qrow who also accepts the boy in addition to having him as her ward. Only Taiyang is missing. Jaune and Ruby are really going to get cavities, they're too sweet together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like what happened to Penny should have been mentioned at least in passing. I guess you’re going for limited third person but then Jaune would definitely note that Penny left before the police arrived or she got escorted by military or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a fun little story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah. The nectar of life the ebbs and flows through us all, only sweeter and a tang. I truly enjoyed the ride (as far as it had come). Just like my meringue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is “The New Frontier” coming along? |
![]() ![]() ![]() My pancreas can’t produce enough insulin. Do I have diabetes now? Fun story! Blades through it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter as usual, can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much floof, I'm dying! Suger overload! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was adorkable |
![]() ![]() They are so cute. I wish dating was this simple and adorable in real life |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute |