Reviews for Jaune in the Machine
EJHowell chapter 11 . 12/3/2020
Great story so far can't wait for the next update
IunctusCorde chapter 11 . 11/10/2020
One the one hand, hell yeah adorable!
On the other, whatever lingering hope of JauneXPenny i had is slowly fading away.
Nain Tarlow chapter 11 . 11/9/2020
That's a nice and interesting story. Looking forward to the rest.
Also I was internally cooing during the last chapter, it was too cute
Snappy Flowah chapter 11 . 11/9/2020
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!.!.!.!
Soooo Cuuuuuuuttteeeeeee!.!.!.!.!

XDDDDDDDDDD

~Snappy~
MrRayney chapter 11 . 11/6/2020
The Lancaster here is just sweet and cute!

God thanks to this chapter I already want to see them together together.

However here my favorite character in this interlude is Yang, I like the overprotective Yang but she gets a bit boring over time. Seeing a Yang more open to the idea that her sister is in a relationship is pleasant, because as she says she will not always be by Ruby's side.

Seeing her accept Jaune as part of the family is something sweet, we already have Qrow who also accepts the boy in addition to having him as her ward. Only Taiyang is missing.

Jaune and Ruby are really going to get cavities, they're too sweet together.
Panjason chapter 8 . 11/4/2020
I feel like what happened to Penny should have been mentioned at least in passing. I guess you’re going for limited third person but then Jaune would definitely note that Penny left before the police arrived or she got escorted by military or something.
Imperial-samaB chapter 11 . 11/3/2020
This is a fun little story
Cobalt Conrad chapter 11 . 11/3/2020
Ah. The nectar of life the ebbs and flows through us all, only sweeter and a tang. I truly enjoyed the ride (as far as it had come).

Just like my meringue.
Cooldude101011 chapter 11 . 11/3/2020
How is “The New Frontier” coming along?
Panjason chapter 11 . 11/2/2020
My pancreas can’t produce enough insulin. Do I have diabetes now?

Fun story! Blades through it.
Lord-Azrael3 chapter 11 . 11/1/2020
Great chapter as usual, can't wait for more!
TwistedView chapter 11 . 11/1/2020
So much floof, I'm dying!
Suger overload!
I love it!
Ghostcraft9 chapter 11 . 10/31/2020
This chapter was adorkable
GhostWriterDT chapter 11 . 10/31/2020
They are so cute. I wish dating was this simple and adorable in real life
Reiki27 chapter 11 . 10/31/2020
cute
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