Reviews for A Ward of Hogwart's |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweet little story! A few grammatical errors were scattered around, but nothing too bad. I liked your idea, although I do wish you would have explained what happened between Claire and Albus. Other than those few things, the overall effect was great. It was sad, but had hope and a happy ending. I normally don't like OC, but you did very well with this :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first time I found this story was a few years ago; I found it again last night and still love it just as much. What I'd love to see is a sequel for it. Oh, just thought I'd mention that chapters 10 and 11 are the same. But overall, I *love* this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 10- Becca seals her note w/a griffindor seal...I thought she was in ravenclaw? Awesome story so far tho :) |
![]() ![]() Short, sweet, and to the point. Very nice story. Thanks a bunch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O I did kinda but yet I didn't ...wow I was all teary and sad, then pop there is the question. I was like OMFG awww YAY and (sob) all in one. love it Element Song |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter brought tears to my eyes, and yet, it is now one of my favs. I love the way you write this. It reminds me of jake my old boyfriend but yet still best friend, and it reminds me of how easily the heart can break. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the idea of Snape having a ward but I don't know how I feel about a twist! It's a father-daughter relationship it can't now change to lovers! Ohh well I guess I'll have to see how you write it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great characterization of Severus! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is perhaps the most unique and well-written stories I have ever read. Is there any chance for a sequel? I gather not because it hasn't been written yet but I thought I should try. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! ;) Again, I normally don't like teacher/student stories...but you do a good job with the stories! I cried for Rebecca when she was hurting so much. I enjoyed it, and I appreciate that they "waited"... Do you have a sequel in mind? I think Rebecca and Snape are a good match, and she seems like she is going to have quite a future ahead of her. Perhaps we could even see a bit of Maremma! Maybe a couple weeks of a teacher exchange...or some special event... So many possibilities! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's done already and whatever, but I just want to tell you that you are really creative, and I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing! Don't write a sequel, it would ruin this perfect story! |
![]() ![]() that was a great story; i like everything in it, especially the fact that they wait it's seem more believable . congratulation. alexandra |