Reviews for Awakening
nightpurr1 chapter 13 . 11/20/2022
good. Thanks for the entertainment.
Ducky1776 chapter 9 . 11/7/2022
Bye Bye Wormtail & Lucius. Couldn't have happened to nicer folks.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 11 . 10/25/2022
Somehow I doubt despite what Amelia said about Fudges actions and coverup being beyond his authority. That anything will happen to him let alone a threat like being booted.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 10 . 10/25/2022
Nearly out of chapters sadly.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 9 . 10/25/2022
Now no Peter to exonerate his godfather. Left Malfoys head behind too.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 8 . 10/25/2022
Really wish instead of the potter brat comment or just that comment. He instead or also said first year had a Voldy possessed Quirrel turn to ash and die in his hands as Quirrels hands were around his throat. Nearly obliviated by blatant fraud somehow chosen as a teacher. Then nearly died after killing a Basilisk with Fawkes help. While showing the scar. Then nearly murdered by the oh so safe dementors 3 different times. Who were sent to protect him from his godfather who never got a trial and was innocent.

Only for the actual guilty party go escape thanks to the so called professor Snape. Now this.

And of course the great help the teachers have been like the most useless one Hooch. But that doesnt nedc to be said.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 5 . 10/25/2022
Great story. Which makes it all the more disappointing theres so few chapters.
Katzztar chapter 4 . 10/17/2022
It's nice to see Hermione talk directly to Sirius here AND get a positive view of him, as that would change some stuff from canon.

In canon Hermione was not negative about Sirius in book four, but then in book 5, she was very negative about him. So much so that when Sirius stated that her plan for students to form a 'illegal' (it was against the rules, not against the law) study group was a good idea, Hermione suddenly started to have doubts ... just because Sirius supported the idea. It always struck me as odd that she took such a reversal over Sirius. But then I realized ... it was her adoration of authority that was to blame. To be more specifically, she saw Molly Weasley as a authority figure, and since Molly deeply disapproved of Sirius, (so much so that she ignored that she was guest in HIS home) that Hermione was copying her.
scyfly chapter 8 . 10/12/2022
didnt the RoR supply him with books? why would he now need the restricted section.

that room is the most underused resource in HP
scyfly chapter 3 . 10/12/2022
well written but it felt it a bit off, a little too mature, the way conversations happen... that is not the train of thoughts from dumb emotional teenagers hell most adult cant control their emotions well enough to come to revelations mid interaction and then turn the conversation to fix it
fraewyn chapter 13 . 10/11/2022
Loved it!
Razeus1 chapter 12 . 9/29/2022
:)
Razeus1 chapter 5 . 9/28/2022
I think the key point said was that "Dumbledore did the Fidelius Charm for James' and Lily's Godric Hollow home" so he knew who was the Secret Keeper... so why did he let Sirius be chucked into Azkaban and left for 12 years?
Ironcoil chapter 12 . 9/25/2022
Really love this story, seeing H/Hr building their relationship with the ups and downs of youth while still working hard to solve the tournament. I truly hope you’ll find the muse to start the next book or continue this one as you have created an amazing foundation of AU that could go so many places. Thanks for the great read!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/24/2022
Oh, so no actual divergence from boring old canon. Great.
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