Reviews for The Children
AbandonedAccountEMF chapter 1 . 6/26/2019
Holy. shit. thank you for posting this tragic work of art. Oh my god
Window girl chapter 1 . 9/10/2017
This was excellent.
eagle eye chapter 1 . 2/1/2017
Oh. Lordy above. This was excellent. Short as it needed to be, saying just what was needed to be said. Brilliant. I really loved the fact that you left guilt heavy upon the survivors and resentment upon the scarred. You did so well. This was lovely as it was horrifying. I actually turned away at one point because it was terrifying to think about. Thank you! This was a wonderful read.
2 angryunicorns chapter 1 . 12/21/2016
Oh boy, this was so heartbreakingly beautiful. I'd love to read a sequel for this !
Maida chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
So, so beautiful and heartbreaking. I'm nearly in tears - this is amazing.
Maria chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
This was somehow both a touching and tender and terrible story. Beautifully written.
Zelda12343 chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
Wow. That was really, really powerful. Sad, but good.
I'm left with only two questions: What exactly did Cho get put in Muggle prison for? Also, what was Polaris' exact role?
Nice job!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
This story is very beautiful
The Wayland Smith chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
That was a touching and twisted little look into that world. Very well written. Very tragic.
Jedi Qui-Gon chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
Very good, well thought out, and tragic story.
Elantil chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
I cannot express how much I love this. It's very long ago, I know, and I only found it because a troper had it up in tvtropes. But time doesn't diminish the beauty of this fic, and if anything, the entirety of DH only makes this shine even brighter. I'd take your version of events over the last two books plus that crap epilogue any day.

I love that you properly addressed the horrors of war, the way the public would deal with the heroes of the story, the very fact that none of them came out of this whole, which should have been the case. I love even that you gave Draco the redemption that he deserves.

This is my second time re-reading this, and though it's been more than a decade, thank you.
Evani chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
This is terribly sad, and brilliantly written. I feel like it should have more, but at the same time it's ended really well. Thank you for writing this though, I like that you didn't go into too many details, and that you saved Dracos blindness as a bit of a twist.
MissMorrigan chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
Hauntingly beautiful.
fripa chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Thanks for writing this story, it was a heartwrenching AU of what could have happened. Good work samvimes:-)
abandondeddeleteddead chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Thank you.
For this super fucking wonderful representation of the characters - especially Draco.
For this amazing, descriptive, intense one-shot.
For your creativity.

Thank you.
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