Reviews for An Unexpected Change
Librarymom4 chapter 1 . 12/1/2020
Please update!
Kms1010 chapter 19 . 10/29/2020
This is listed as complete, so I think it is abandoned but please keep writing! I love it and want to read to the end, and so does everyone else. It’s really coming together, please update if you can.
nooneinparticular101 chapter 19 . 10/11/2020
i cant wait for the next update
drarry is cannon chapter 12 . 10/7/2020
thank you Sirius, I would definitely rather be a werewolf than have my period, because it's only one day a month, not 4. But I wouldn't want to be a female werewolf, because that would be horrible
Asilrettor chapter 19 . 9/27/2020
Please tell me there’s more
This is amazing
DaughterofAthena00 chapter 19 . 7/17/2020
This is a great story! Be confident in your writing! Enjoy the process and realize how many people are enjoying your story. Don’t give up!
UniqueBloodDuh chapter 19 . 6/25/2020
I just randomly went to the last chapter to check how far this story is going and read your note... please don't be so hard on yourself! your story is wonderful. I'm still at chapter 10 and so far I can tell it has so much potential ! Honestly, I've never read this plot before and the fact that you came up with it is a proof that you're creative enough to go through it until the end. There are many different paths you can choose to take with it and if you're running out of ideas or facing this block of thoughts that most writers face it's alright, really, it's not something that only you go through , it's an obstacle everyone has to face. Just take your time ,think where you want to go with the story, put up some endings for the characters and see if they satisfy you, if not then just think of something else, nobody is rushing you.
It's your story and you decide how to write it, as long as you like it, don't worry about what people would think, and trust me, if you love your story then just try and it'll lead the way for you, most stories tend to write themselves as long as you give them the opportunity.
Other than that , you can simply ask people for ideas, many writers do that with their stories, or you can join some fanfiction groups and discuss ideas with people, I'm in many group ff groups in facebook and many people do that I'll personally help you if you require it just please don't say that your story sucks you're being just like Harry xx best of wishes 3
raffa18sapio chapter 19 . 6/9/2020
I can't wait to read the continuous
Guest chapter 19 . 6/3/2020
That was a pretty good chapter. But can you please update again and maybe more about Harry’s abuse and that he finally revealed that the Dursley’s were abusing him
Guest chapter 19 . 6/3/2020
Don’t call yourself a bad writer, I think your story is great so far. But three questions, is the triwizard tournament still happening and if so will Harry participate. And also are the older mauraders going to make a appearance (for example Harry takes them to visit Sirius in the cave or something like that). And the ending makes it sound like snape and lily get a romantic relationship, are they, because if so that would be very problematic. Overall I like your beginning and I think this has great potential. Keep up the good work
nightwing27 chapter 2 . 6/5/2020
good thing in my stories If I do something like this their memories will not be erase unlike others I don't believe in that dumb fake and myth paradox crap
Kuro Neko9695 chapter 19 . 6/4/2020
Thank you for not giving up on criticism, it would have been very sad if such a beautiful story had been left unfinished ... Keep it up! Do not give up, remember that nobody forces you to read so do not disturb those who enjoy your beautiful story
Harryhollic2018 chapter 19 . 6/3/2020
Thank you for updating! I really enjoy this story, and I hope you continue it.
nightwing27 chapter 19 . 6/3/2020
the story is good you doing good people are diiots not having faith in their stories
Windreamersan chapter 19 . 6/3/2020
That was really good, thank you for updating. Your story is not bad at all and anyway, everything you write is a learning process, it doesn't have to be perfect. Even if you're not happy with your current writing skills, which I honestly believe are already better than most people here, you'll notice that if you keep writing you'll slowly get better. You just need a little more confidence, I know it's hard, but try not to be so hard on yourself :)
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