Yeah this is a nice story. Obviously some flaws and stuff but I'm reading this in a lighthearted way so most of them are just funny to me. Don't mind it at all and Pertemis is always a good thing. I wanna see more soon. Keep it up!

I'm honestly surprised by how Michele I enjoyed this seeing as it's only the first chapter

Really good plot, different but really good

Really good start, keep up the great work.

Reckon you can focus on just finishing the stories you started? That would be great. Making new stories is just stupid and makes you like other authors like TidalMoon2003 and TyGuy45 who ditch their stories soon enough.