So it seems things went pretty well with everyone meeting for the first time. That confrontation was a surprise, but the r ew actions of Harrow and the rest of Callum's family seems to have impressed Rayla's fathers.

“I outrank them”. I love Amaya so much!

Huh. I thought it was gonna be Runaan and Ethari coming early. Who knew?

This has been a pretty good story, except I didn't appreciate the f-bombs and swear words, and the flipping off. Aside from that, this really has been good! I loved how you seemed to capture real life like that!

Nice job, can't wait to see more of Runaan.

Reads the first sentence. Oh snap.

It's too bad Rayla isn't feeling good but it sounds like Callum's conversation with Runaan and Ethari was a real success and has helped improve his relationship with Runaan. I'll be looking forward to your next update!

I love how close this friend group is!

the momeNT i read "the lightning thief" i EXPLODED omg look at my 2 favorite fandoms together i can't take it

Quite nice chapter, can't wait to see more. Happy new year.

P.s. yeah, we saw what Cladia's wrath can be in canon.

Hey, have you ever considered writing a chapter dedicated to Disabled people? Like, a one-time Disabled OC.

Wow I love this fic so much, I’m also a football fan and the way you set up the situations shows you clearly understand the sport, which keeps me in anticipation a lot better because I actually picture the game going on.

this is amazing already! kinda mad i just found this now lol

it's ok, i have a crush on rayla too

Lovely introspection, best of luck with next chapters. Merry Christmas and happy new year.

We love a ship that has hopeless romantics!