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I think I’ll pause here until I see another update on the back end, but reading through your own events of the Dragon Ball with the “chaos theory” elements was a lot funner that I initially thought it would. More I read the more the story flowed at a pace that felt natural and the more I could tell you were hitting a stride of sorts. I hope you come back one day and continue this, because it was a throughly fun read that felt like, well… Dragon Ball to me.

Here are the list of Powerlevels of DB: C&C Characters for the start to Early-mid Saiyan Saga

(21st Tournament saga)

Goku(berfore training10
Goku(Great Ape100
Goku(after training119
Goku(tail regrown125
Goku(Great Ape1,250
Caulifla: 11
Caulifla(Great Ape):110
Caulifla(after training120
Krillin:10
Krillin(after training97
Master Roshi(suppressed89
Master Roshi(Buffed139
Launch: 6
Bulma: 4
Yamcha: 73
"Jackie Chun180
Nam: 87
Ranfan: 14
Bacterian: 14
Kaiju Giran: 71

(Red Ribbon Saga):

Launch: 20
Krillin: 99
Yamcha: 75
Bulma: 5
Dr Briefs: 5
Panchy: 5
Master Roshi: 139
Goku: 125
Caulifla(tail regrown127
Eigther: 100
Major Metalitron: 90
Colonel Yellow:7
Colonel Violet: 8
General White: 15
Colonel Silver: 28
General Blue: 74
Taopaipai: 146
Goku(after Korin training157
Caulifla(after Korin training159
Korin: 169
Upa: 1.5
Bora: 20
Commander Red: 4
Assistant Black: 38
Black's Robot Suit: 95
Cheeka: 5
Gebo: 15
Dr Gero: 4

(Fortuneteller Baba arc):

Mai: 7
Shu: 6
Pilaf: 6
Yamcha: 80
Krillin: 105
Launch: 40
Invisible Guy: 14
Mummy: 45
Devilman: 65
Grandpa Gohan: 156
Goku: 162
Caulifla: 164
Bardock(Flashback10,000
Gine(Flashback500

(22nd Tournament Saga):

Man- Wolf: 19
Pamput: 56
Yamcha: 128
Krillin: 143
Goku(match mode165
Caulifla(match mode165
Master Roshi: 139
Master Shen: 92
King Chappa: 70
Chaotzu: 138
Chi-Chi: 167
Tien: 180
Goku(serious mode190
Caulifla(serious mode192
Caulifla(Wrathful state1,920

(Demon King Piccolo Saga):

Krillin: 143
King Furry: 5
Dr Briefs: 5
Panchy: 5
W.T Announcer: 5
Bulma: 6
Launch: 45
Mai: 7
Shu: 6
Pilaf: 6
Chi-Chi: 165
Ox-King: 60
Kaiju Giran: 71
Yamcha(healing from broken leg128
Chaotzu: 138
Tien: 186
Shenron: 20
Master Mutaito: 175
Young Roshi: 85
Young Shen: 80
Young Grandma Menra: 70
Korin: 169
Bulma(climbed Korin's temple20
Yajirobe: 181
Tambourine: 200
Goku: 190
Caulifla: 192
King Piccolo: 201
Drum: 190
King Piccolo(youth restored260
Goku(Divine Water260
Goku(Wrathful state, Fist of the Oozaru2,600
Caulifla(Divine Water262
Caulifla(Wrathful state2,620
Kami: 220
Mr Popo: 1,000
Gine: 3,900

(23rd Tournament/Demon Duo Saga):

Yamcha: 167
Krillin: 206
Launch: 87
Bulma: 30
Chaotzu: 140
Tien: 250
Grandma Merna: 165
Master Shen: 92
Cyborg Tao: 189
Kami: 301
Mr Popo: 1,030
Chi-Chi(Saiyan, w/weights suppressed240
Chi-Chi(Saiyan, w/weights290
Chi-Chi(Saiyan340
Chi-Chi(Great Ape3,400
Piccolo jr(w/weights suppressed230
Piccolo jr(w/weights280
Piccolo jr: 330
Piccolo(Giant1,330
Goku(w/weight290
Goku: 360
Goku(Great Ape3,600
Goku(Zenkai390
Goku(Super Kame-hame-ha420
Caulifla(w/weights292
Caulifla: 362
Caulifla(Great Ape3,620
Caulifla(Wrathful state3,620
Caulifla(Zenkai392
Caulifla(Super Kame- Burst422

/Saiyan Saga/
(RaditzRenso Saga):

Turtle: .001
Farmer: 5
Bulma: 40
Violet: 9
Cheeka: 9
Gebo: 20
Krillin: 216
Master Roshi: 139
Kami: 301
Goku(weights423
Goku: 545
Caulifla(weights424
Caulifla: 547
Chi-Chi(weights411
Chi-Chi: 502
Piccolo(weights392
Piccolo: 496
Gohan: 25
Gohan(upset800
Gohan(rage1,531
Merna: 25
Merna(upset800
Merna(rage1,531
Raditz(holding back1,200
Raditz(full power1,500
Renso(hold back1,350
Renso(full power1,550
Goku(Super Kame-Burst1,097
Caulifla(Super Kame-Burst1,097
Piccolo(#1 Special Beam Cannon1,184
Chi-Chi(#1 Special Beam Cannon1,241
Chi-Chi(#2 Special Beam Cannon1,503
Goku(Zenkai650
Caulifla(Zenkai652
Raditz(Zenkai1,750
King Yemma: 1,950

Training before Saiyans arrive:

Piccolo: 496
Chi-Chi: 540
Gohan: 25
Gohan(Great Ape8,000
Merna: 25
Merna(Great Ape8,000
Raditz: 1,750
Krillin: 216
Tarble: 7,500
Jica: 2,900
Goku: 650
Caulifla: 652
King Kai: 3,500
King Vegeta: 13,500

Saiyan Saga: against the Saibamen:

Piccolo: 2,500
Soya(Chi-Chi2,900
Raditz: 3,000
Jica: 3,200
Tarble: 8,000
Gohan: 1,750
Merna: 1,750
Krillin: 1,750
Yamcha: 1,450
Tien: 1,790
Launch: 1,300
Chaotzu: 1,100
Saibamen: 1,200 to 1,500 each
Corne: 3,800
Onio: 3,900
Nappa: 4,000
Kale: 13,500
Vegeta: 18,000

Indeed plus with what I'm hoping is just another really long break and not something worse. I love this story.

Ngl I didn’t except the concept and execution of this to be so good. It’s a shame that this project might not get finished.

You’re definitely a good writer. Dialougue was really well done. If you’re not gonna finish this, then I hope you find a way to make money from writing.

HOPE YOU GET RAPED AND FUCKING DIE,WORTHLESS BITCH!

KEEP BULLYING ME. ILL POST ANOTHER SEX FIC TONIGHT!

(ALL YOUR STORIES SUCK AND I CANT STOP YAWNING WHEN I READ THEM!) HOPE YOU DIE OF CANCER,BITCH!

I just dont get why gohan wants to be a scholar
Your keeping it cliche he literally has TWO saiyan parents and you still cant make him a warrior?

Whats up with evil chi chi trope

I just realized but CC Caulifla sortof dogded a bullet in not knowing her biological family. She has no memory of neither her mom, dad or Renso, heck when Renso sees her, he doesn't recognise her immediately like Raditz with Goku, until he gets her name, which means that when Caulufla was born, she was just placed in a nursing pod until the evacuation of planet vegeta, even then its likely someone else placed her in the faulty pod till Bardock moved her to an operating one

Not following canon nor canon facts/lore on purpose? Tough luck for those who criticize you for it. Why? Because THIS! IS! FANFICTION!
LOL. With that out of the way, not bad for a first chapter. Pity that Kale isn't around for this ride too, but oh well.

If it makes you feel better Monster Carrot’s name is Carrot Master in the Manga. Also Toriyama confirmed that the carrot gang is still alive, just floating in space.

If Goku’s so worried about the moon or keeping his fight with Caulifla fair, why doesn’t he just cut his tail or pull it out like he did Caulifla?

Ariadne Venegas , the author wrote Vegan Pizza, not vegetarian pizza, so that means no mozzarella, since it’s made of cheese, a dairy product. Vegans as a rule don’t eat meat and food produced by animals products.

You know that real italian pizza is only mozzarella, tomato and basil! So is vegetarian all the way, even if they didn’t think it was that way when they invented it.

So you are totally wrong about what it is a real pizza…

Obviously everybody has their preferences that are not “real pizza”. I personally like them with chicken and mushrooms or smoked salmon and arugula.

Can I make a suggestion? You should look at What if Shenron was A Z Fighter? by Masako X Because that story is awesome and see if it can be implemented here.

Now if you look at that series then you need to look at these ideas. First of if this happens Shenron would be a Dragon among Dragons that would be approaching Super Shenron in terms of power. Speaking of divine powers and Dragons I have a few suggestions for the story.

First off I would also love to see Shenron first develop all the techniques of the Shadow Dragons along with Kami's abilities as Guardian of the Earth and everything I asked for previously just to make him a literal Force of Nature.

Second, Maybe Shenron also trains and gains the powers and techniques of the Lesser Kai's like King Kai, and also the Supreme Kai's just to be a better protector of Earth and also a more powerful warrior that the Earth needs. Maybe that can happen before the Majin Buu Saga. Also if Shenron gets better training with more God Ki in Dragon Ball Super he would become a more Divine being than Kami when he had the Throne of Guardian of Earth.

Third please let this story enter Dragon Ball Super, Dragon Ball Daima, and also take some elements of Dragon Ball GT and make Shenron face down the Shadow Dragon's. But as a downside he also faces down Shadow Dragons born from not only the Negative Energy of the Dragon Balls but also Shenron's human and God Ki and his Divine Dragon Powers and Guardian of Earth's Abilities.

That would make the story be far more personal for Shenron as these are technically his children and maybe he tries to redeem some of them which can happen. This is also an example to the Z Fighters of what happens if the Dragon Balls and also Shenron himself is misused.