Reviews for Carrots and Cauliflowers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This should change a LOT of things. Bardock was pretty powerful to begin with, so if you still have Frieza around it's going to need an explanation. Beyond that their race is rather inclined towards destruction, and I really can't see king Vegeta being a good guy, so it's going to take a lot to make a good saiyan race. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice fight scene :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The reason for them learning how to fly is eh, but whatever I guess. Nicely done :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That last line is great, and I definitely appreciate Gohan actually mentioning the spaceship. Good job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Having Checka wandering about doing tech stuff like they have her doing in DBZ Kakarot would be kind of cool, I approve :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd say Gero has less reason to hate him actually, but I can see him hating Goku intensely regardless. Having his family be alive though should make some interesting changes to the android arc though. Android 16 at the least shouldn't be the same, and he'd either despise his family or long for them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Having one hand behind their back matters much less when it's still 2 on 1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done lol. Of course the question in my mind is why they don't just go back for Bulma's actual items, but whatever I guess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I admit I'm enjoying this even is I know it's something of a retelling. Goku should have an easier time with someone having his back, and I'm glad to see that happening so far :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool, I admit this does jack my interest in the fic. Good job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I admit, I'd like for once to have Goku learn to control the transformation. You know it's possible because it's shown in canon, so learning how or wishing it should be the way to go. Ah well, hopefully you go that route. Nicely done so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is retarded two Saiyan's training together should make their growth explode so much faster that they should both individually be stronger than Young King Piccolo already BARE MINIMUM. Cya |
![]() ![]() ![]() "BÄ€SUTO!" That's literally just her saying "burst" you dotard for fuck's same. |