Ughhh I love this chapter sooo much! Thank for not making us wait so long with these two 3 love that they got into a relationship so early on tbh hahaha sometimes can't stand a slow burn

Ahhhhh rereading this in hope when I make it to the latest chapter of the sequel there will be a new update! :)

I find it odd that Ellie expresses her differences from her family in wearing clothes that seem more muggle when she lived at home until she was 16. How did she get the idea and the clothes? It’s as if she expressed herself by wearing a sari or wooden shoes. Also a bit weird that her example of a song her mother sings came out in 2019. Narcissa is always listening to the newest music then?

Another self-insert character who is beautiful and intelligent, loved by all and far too perfect to be compelling. Her empathic abilities are powerful, possesed by her alone and have no downside. Despite never having a formal education, she effortlessly excels in every subject the moment she steps into Hogwarts. Everyone loves and desires her. She will unravel plots and hidden motivations with ease, and will patiently explain the details to all of the other, less insightful characters.

Mary Sue, anyone?

I finished this story yesterday but I was so pumped that you already posted the sequel I had to read it first before I came back and left a review! I’ve been looking for a good Malfoy Sister x Harry fic for so long and this is the best one I’ve encountered! Ellie is my favorite OC i’ve read about in a long time. Thank you for taking the time to actual complete a fic of this size and doing it so well and sharing your talent for writing and character building with all of us 3

I just finished this story and overall it was well written. I have to say one of the best Harry/OC I've read. I'm looking forward to the your version of D.H. My only real criticism is the 5 or 6 chapters after Elara went home, it just seemed like it took a round about path to reach a decision that could have just as easily been forced on her at Malfoy Manor. Very good story though.

this is one of the only fanfics I’ve read where pansy is honestly portrayed as human and I love it

Okay you wasted five chapters from when Elara was marked to her caving in to the cliche join me or I'll hurt your family. Basically the coma, the fever the ridiculous amount of angst and drama were irrelevant! The story was really going well until chapter 21. I'm probably going to keep reading because it's still not finished.

It’s midnight and I have to be up and ready to teach in 6 hours but here I am selling my soul to your story

I’ve been looking for a good story for a hot minute, and I’m SO excited to read this one!

Ughhh this is so good but im so mad at draco like boiii pls pls pls make him switch sides in the sequel, early on too !

Loved your story , now favourited!

Omg omg she told him

Your writing and creativity is excellent. Love your story. Excited for more.

Very well written. Excited for more.