Reviews for Elizabeth at Pemberley |
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![]() ![]() Aw this is very cute! Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() OMG! Want to read more - Can't wait for the meeting! |
![]() ![]() The library description! *sighhhhhh* - we all need one of those! |
![]() ![]() I love this! This is exactly what Lizzie looks like and her feelings are in so much detail! |
![]() ![]() Thank you for this story. I have always imagined a story like this where people in Pemberley help with the matchmaking! Glad someone had actually written about it. So excited for the next chapter. This is so cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so much fun! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a delight of a story. I can’t wait till I continue unto the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a great story, with a solid plot. However the amount of descriptive passages take away from the story, making it stodgy to read. Perhaps you might like to get more of the action on camera with the use of dialogue. It can be very effective in keeping the flow of the story and engaging your readers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. Please continue soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm thinking, what Darcy doesn't know is, that the entire staff was prepared for this reunion meeting. The bath water is probably already in the tub and his valet has clean clothes set out. He'll be clean, dressed and ready to present himself in record time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well Lizzy you didn't run into Darcy but Georgie is just as good. Everyone now knows you and Darcy have a history together. Let the matchmaking begin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I LOVE IT! Can’t wait for another chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Elizabeth, if you think the painting is lifelike, just you wait... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhhhh yeah. I can’t wait for the next chapter :) well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter I am looking forward to the meeting. Thanks for sharing your twist. |