Reviews for California Road Trip |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I want more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd love to read more! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man I sincerely hope you decide to continue this, this chapter was great and the premise sounds awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to reaad more of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your modern take on Jesus is fantastic. I’m so down for reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start - I think it's the first time I've seen Josh in a Good Omens story - and I'd love to see more. |
![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know ,it took me a while after he introduced himself to know that was JESUS but man ,that was a wild ride and I enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, this looks so fun! Always love to see more Lucifer/Good Omens mash-ups. The idea of Adam messing up airports because he can't comprehend how big the US is feels oddly true . . . though I have to point out that LAX does have free wi-fi. Josh and Adam's awkward conversation about Adam's other other family also felt really on-point. I liked how you portrayed Josh, and his speech about owing the respect to God that you owe to your grandmother. That's definitely in line with a lot of the old testament prophets. I like the idea of Jesus leading a pretty low-key life currently, helping out in small ways, and appreciate that you kept him Jewish. You'll be drawing from show!Lucifer canon, then? |