Reviews for A New Start
Sageofchaos chapter 4 . 8/6/2020
hope to read more.
midnightscar17 chapter 4 . 3/29/2020
Please update soon
LL chapter 4 . 3/22/2020
This could be a good story
marquis.shax chapter 4 . 3/22/2020
not a bad story but your chapters are way too short and don't really do much as they're way too short so you don't put much information in them just brief glimpes of what the crew is doing. It's basically you just saying "Luffy beat Buggy, Naruto joined his crew and they left the island. The end"
marquis.shax chapter 3 . 3/22/2020
it's absolutely fucking retarded to put up an authors note just to say that your chapter is delayed the only time you should do that is if it's going to be an extremely long period of time or you're completely dropping the story
Guest chapter 4 . 2/28/2020
You have a hood structure so far but remember to pace yourself if you move the story along too quickly you miss out on the more important factors and some scenes might not be as impactful as a result just take things bit by bit
Akuro361 chapter 4 . 2/24/2020
Chapters 1 through four Seem to be more of you talking about a Summary then telling a story.
StrongGuy159 chapter 4 . 2/24/2020
Cool chapter continue please.
Gamelover41592 chapter 4 . 2/24/2020
excellent work on this chapter
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 2 . 1/18/2020
Awesome chapter keep it up
StrongGuy159 chapter 2 . 1/18/2020
Cool 2 chapters continue please.
GamerX568 chapter 2 . 1/17/2020
Actually, Minato does know Sage Mode. He just uses it differently.
thor94 chapter 2 . 1/17/2020
also can't wait for future chapters, like seeing robin and WG-marine reaction about naruto having far more destructrive power than the most dangerous ancient weapon (with all so6p and jinchuriki skills, a full powered naruto has likely enough power to destroy entire countries and even moon sized target in few minutes)
Gamelover41592 chapter 2 . 1/17/2020
excellent work on this chapter :)
Gamelover41592 chapter 1 . 1/15/2020
this could work let's see where this goes
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