Story starts out strong but quickly becomes ass.

I'm dying, Emiya's student life is such a stark contrast to the first one he led.

Emiya's scary aura is drawing in girls who like bad boys aHAHAHAA XD Rin and Emiya relationship in this verse is shaping up to be itnerseting, her viewing him as someone to compete with, as opposed to someoen who she has to look out for.

Kiritsugu seeing through his son's snarkishness that Emiya wouldn't abandon his allies, despite how difficult it is.

I also want to cry seeing Emiya's purpose in keeping his precious people alive and safe. But also wtf, Kiritsugu died so much earlier?

One day, I would like Emiya to tell Kiritsugu how much his father means to bhim (even if he's a terrible father at times), when Emiya tries to save him. I'm also very scared for Emiya on what on else part-time help to the Barthomeloi facility MEANS. They better not torture our boy, he's been through enough.

DAMN, you really see how well Emiya and Kiritsugu work together well as partners, Emiya being frightfully efficient in disabling the homunculi and Kiritsugu killing Meluastea that quietly.

Emiya reevaluating his life, now that he gets to watch it play it out but with extra perspective. I love tht he gets another chance to understatnd Kiritsugu, another chance to save Sakura... working with people he would never have done.

I love how Emiya's stubborness has manifested in a completely selfish way. Being there for those he loves, that includes Kiritsugu too ;_;

It's cool seeing Kiritsugu's expertise in using modern warfare against magi.

Thanks for sharing this story!

SaltEEEEE

Yea whatever you're trying to do, I really don't care for a re-tread of "Shirou's" childhood. You've definitely improved since writing this, since the Fear the Superhero story that led me here is leagues better.

Not really vibing with this. Archer is much too shallow and inconstant. Something like happiness is a worthless idea and should hold zero sway on him. Also, a Shirou who has not witnessed UBW should hold no chance against Gil but also Archer winning as he did makes no sense.

It's all too forced and contrived.

PLEASE tell me this is a Shirou/EMIYA Harem.
PLEASE!

Welp shit maybe gilgamesh could save the day I mean he might hate the current humanity but I doubt he's less fond of them then he is of the ancestors

Lol that ending

Interesting

Love the story, can’t wait for the next chapter hopefully.