Reviews for Breath of a Hero
jimmy.oz chapter 1 . 5/2
Seems interesting needs updates.
LegendaryMob chapter 42 . 2/25
she's too sadistic tsk
LegendaryMob chapter 34 . 2/25
too many oc's...
kingpanther036 chapter 15 . 2/9
I like Ibara in your what if compare to her in the anime and comic
Dirt Rider 712 chapter 15 . 1/20
Honestly, I’m not sure how much longer I’m going to continue reading this. I stayed up all last night reading and enjoying, but now there are just too many OCs showing up. The story is losing focus on Izuku, and he’s becoming less unique as time goes on. I might read a couple more chapters to see how things go, but I don’t want to invest more time if it continues in this manner.

It is well written and interesting other than my above complaint though. Good luck, and thank you for writing!

Dirt Rider
Guest chapter 47 . 1/1
are you updating your other stories, because on patreon they are updated but they are not updated on here or ao3
Crevanille chapter 47 . 12/4/2022
Welp, I'm glad Rui had the sense to leave some back up plans for an exit open. So many questions though!

You can really see how everyone has their own agendas and plots crisscrossing all over the place! Super exciting!

...Oh, and Yae's worry was cute.
Best part? CHARACTER GROWTH! Good on you Katsuki!
Harleking31 chapter 47 . 11/29/2022
Let's go demons together strong
LaUgHiNgmaN chapter 47 . 11/29/2022
LOL Overhaul getting called out by the demons, but their words are true he's nothing more than a lap dog clinging onto the only lifeline he can see.

Shigaraki failed to win them over... Its obvious he never play any MMO games or otherwise he realize its also his personality along with "charisma". Thinking he has any loyalty of the demons AFO brings back, *scoff* he's really delusional, his army at USJ if he realize it in video game terms are "mercenary NPCs" bought but no true loyalty to remain once gone.

Nomus including a High End killed. (0_0') I guess for demons they're bothersome, but for moons like Kokushibo they might as well be paper walls he can walk through. Makes me wonder how well would anyone getting taught by him deal with the Nomus... Yeah, neverminded I can see Dr. Garaki would be complaining that his High Ends were the pinnacle of his and AFO's research and the demons just made them all look like chumps... and chumpettes(sorry momentarily forgot there was female Nomu in Canon).

Demons thinking for themselves instead of blindly following the people who brought them back, great characters developments right there for them not like people from Dr. Stone anime Tsubasa brought back who were content to permanently live in the Stone Age state(seriously they didn't think about what would happen if they get sick and have no medicines). Pointing out in case Shigaraki fails and his goals don't have actual matter to them, I got a decent laugh out of that.

If the demons get capture and be experiment on to reverse engineer their revival?... Yeah pretty sure people are going to be split between morally right thing and pragmatic thing, if people can just come back to life willy nilly like then what's the point of Pro Heroes existing, that and if Death can materialize itself I'm pretty sure it would be piss off at people for bringing back people who's been dead for long time and those who time has come, I can see heads rolling... Literally.

Shigaraki isn't going get Stain's loyalty either, reason not because Canon but because he failed to realize why he failed to get the demons' loyalties.

Again another exceptional chapter and look forward for more future chapters!
NinjaFang1331 chapter 47 . 11/28/2022
Excellent job on the chapter
R-king 93 chapter 47 . 11/28/2022
Awesome chapter
Koyomiku chapter 47 . 11/28/2022
you give izuku and katsuki senzu beans
TheRealD3lph0xL0v3r chapter 47 . 11/28/2022


Honestly. . . I Know it's most likely never gonna happen. . .

But I think it'd be cool to HYPOTHETICALLY See Muzan Jackson vs ALL FOR ONE. . .

And See Which complete P.O.S. dies first
Guest chapter 4 . 11/12/2022
If the main character had only the breath of the sun plus one more, then it would be a cool work. But it turned out another shitty Marty Sue
kingpanther036 chapter 46 . 11/12/2022
hi can I reach out to you would like to have permission on your story please reply
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