Reviews for Harry Potter and the Inquisitor of Hogwarts |
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Books85 chapter 7 . 10/14 I believe I memorized Invictus more than 50 years ago, but it is the sort of poem that sticks with you. Especially if you recite it silently when you're called on the carpet for doing the right thing. Thanks for the reminder! |
G Fawkes chapter 33 . 9/24 Once again, this time especially, now that He's NOT a fugitive, why in the Heck wouldn't Harry just floo to the Three Broomsticks, and WALK to the castle?! Yes 200 mph broom rides are fun. But not 500 miles! Yeah, A hundred mile trip in half an hour would be cool as hell. Sitting on a broom for 2 1/2 hours can't be fun. P.s. seriously? My tablet didnt know the word 'hell'? |
G Fawkes chapter 30 . 9/24 So. What I want to know... (Taking a scene straight out of one of those Fast &Furious movies "Fast Five"? Maybe? " is gonna just like, slap dat ass, or is he gonna' GRAB dat ass?!" meaning Harry's interaction with Daphne, the best looking girl at Hogwarts. |
G Fawkes chapter 30 . 9/24 Recaps are for teeth and old tires. No one who ever wrote a book, EVER, stopped in the middle and did a review. Even JKR, who, if memory serves, took like, two extra years, so about three, total before book 5 came out. I remember waiting and waiting, and then got word that it would STILL be another YEAR! (Apparently she's got dyslexia or something that makes the editors and team "fixing" her writing, A nightmare.) Not that's not ok. She got her Billion, and I don't, so... Anyway. Recap not needed for those of us reading all at once, now, years later. And you WILL have more people read it after its done, than you had waiting for each individual chapter. How long has Tolkien been dead? Or even the Jack Ryan books! Tom Clancy's gone, and his books continue, with other writers. |
G Fawkes chapter 29 . 9/24 Pretty good! (My son is autistic and bowls in a special needs league. One of the other groups is two twin girls who come with mom, dad, and one of their grandmothers, to watch them every week. Grandma exclaims "Pretty good!" every time one of them, or even our sons, roll a strike or spare. It has become a 'go to' saying, for anything good that happens.) So... Pretty good! |
G Fawkes chapter 27 . 9/23 If he's 4 hours back from when the trouble starts, why not fly to the Three Broomsticks , or The Hogs Head, and floo to the Leaky Cauldron? That's saving a FIVE HUNDRED MILE broom ride (Inverness(ish) to London). He's not IN trouble yet, and kids skip off school all the time. |
G Fawkes chapter 26 . 9/23 Could have been a bit more sarcastic. "Pansy, everyone in this room knows I wouldn't touch you, even with Malfoy's dick!" Or, "Gibbon? Like the monkey, right? So, trained ape for the Toad, here? What does she make you do for her when no one's around?!" |
G Fawkes chapter 21 . 9/22 I have severely missed something along the way. A prison? And I assume we're putting the inner circle of death eaters (no capitals. Fuck them) in it? |
G Fawkes chapter 18 . 9/22 I'm not buying that vanishing cabinet explanation, at all. In Canon, Draco, all bluster and no brains, fixed the cabinet in the Room of Requirement. How hard can it be?! |
G Fawkes chapter 16 . 9/22 There was no mention of inclement weather that I saw. Oops. Sorry. I was wrong. "Despite the unpleasant weather conditions" was not registering on my brain. Since there was no "impervious" (sp?) spell done on his glasses, and no further mention, at all, of rain, lightning, thunder, whatever, I must have dismissed it, altogether. |
G Fawkes chapter 13 . 9/21 Hermione does tend to have a stick up her arse. (If she were of legal age, I would wish it were mine. But as a third year that is disgusting and illegal. Emma Watson, though, is 34 now, so...) |
G Fawkes chapter 12 . 9/21 Fuck Molly Weasley. (and I didnt even capitalize the bitch's name. My tablet did that) |
G Fawkes chapter 8 . 9/21 Pretty good. The a/n's are just ridiculously long. Since I don't read them, I can't say they're warranted. I'd say I would be more impressed if you said nothing. Just " Mic drop". And move on. |
Guest chapter 7 . 9/21 And... His lawyer is...? |
G Fawkes chapter 6 . 9/21 Ya THINK?! |