|Reviews for Deliverance|
| patrickmgrimm chapter 26 . 4/16
You have spun such a wonderful tale
Keep Going! Keep Creating your Wonderful World in the vast ocean that is the Multiverse
May the Muses sing to you their song and help write the story you have drawn.
| X9-Killbot chapter 11 . 2/19
My one complaint here is Kephri is a bit on the mary sue side. In 30ish days, without doing much than tame a few chaurus and start brewing mead she has the Dark Brotherhood scared of her, the Thieves Guild marking her as a non-target, and the entirety of Skyrim's Jarls gathering on her word (even if it is about a big threat such as a Falmer invasion, even though the falmer probably wouldn't care about a hundredish chaurus). It's a bit too much. If she had a year and proved herself a good amount of times I could see it. Not in 30 days.
| 1stSlug chapter 26 . 1/24
Just found this little gem, a real shame it's not been updated in almost 10 months. :(
| Sable Dawn chapter 26 . 1/12
Never thought of it before, but where did all them Draugr learn the4 thu'um, and if the undead can learn it why not the Chaurus after all the shouts can be upgraded by meditating on the concept and meaning of the words that compose them so the concept thought speech of the Chaurus sounds like a good fit, plus the image of the bugs shouting at dragons amuses me.
| Sable Dawn chapter 23 . 1/12
Good thing Khepri started making the stamina potions, Farkas is going to need them, and I really really pity the silver hands.
| Sable Dawn chapter 16 . 1/12
Butler Bori has such great aliteration that it needs to be sung in a bardic manner.
| Sable Dawn chapter 12 . 1/12
The Thu'um is going to lead to much escalation, I love it.
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/4/2022
Makes me wonder how things would turn out if the Thieves Guide moved into Khepri's town. Obviously asking first.
| mst3ktoo chapter 18 . 11/30/2022
Ah yes, the inescapable fear that Khepri is nearby, staring at your tits.
| mst3ktoo chapter 7 . 11/30/2022
Lol, Evander found her exhausting and Khepri thought he was a machine gun!
| wavesunderstars chapter 26 . 11/19/2022
great story, I love it!
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/27/2022
No, that would be Farkas.
No, that would be Farkas.
...SCRAWNY, MORTAL BITCH!"
No, that would be Aela. Khepri is human as far as Elenwen knows.
Thanks for the chapter! Also, it's kind of funny that Khepri keeps naming the charus considering how bad Taylor was at naming things. Although it's not like there's any competition over naming rights here.
| wavesunderstars chapter 4 . 10/23/2022
I like this so far. One mistake I found, Elenwen says "thank Mephala." I'd like to point out that the Altmer don't worship the Deadra or the Tribunal like the Dunmer, but rather have a pantheon of their own, which include the Eight Divines and other Aedra
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/11/2022
Espero que todo te vaya bien y que no falte mucho para el próximo capítulo.
| Rundivyn chapter 15 . 7/31/2022
I wish this was a question the game. Fighting the tyrant sounds like it would be fun as would fighting the falmer king and his guard.