You really used lyrics from that overlord song

An now. All that's left is Ruby and Weiss.

I literally thought this was going to be some kind of horror, but instead I ended up with stiffy, lol. That was pretty hot... so good job on that.

Awesome story, thanks for writing it! The struggle for dominance theme made a lot of sense, it was a nice touch.

Soooo... Ruby and Weiss?
Where?

~Snappy~

Spicy. Kind of thought Weiss and Ruby would enter the fray given how possessive they are of him.

Damn good chapter. You write some excellent smut, Mallobaude, and I quite liked that this story took place in the Abominable Monster Classmates universe. Speaking of which, I really ought to catch up to the latest chapter on that story...

Thumbs up

A shame it must end, but it was quite the entertaining read.

WHEW! Someone get me a glass of milk cause that was SPICY! Grade A stuff here dude!

nice. your stories are always entertaining

I agree with the other reviewer. As soon as Blake came at Juane from behind, Hentacle popped into my mind and thought of Juane really wishing he had lube.

plz more go after weiss then ruby!

Hah, you walked right up to the tentacle-line there. I thought for sure Yang was going to keep going with him while Blake would use her tentacles on his ass. Such a tease.
On another note, I still think you should make this canon. It'd really help to fill in the blanks on Jaune's relationship with Blake and Yang and why they're sorta okay with him taking the lead on things. It'd also help to reinforce one of the subplots (I think) you're going with the main story, as Jaune makes the girls a bit more human and good, they make him a bit more dark and menacing, which you can see here in his 'S' tendencies.