Reviews for Too Many Champions
Candace Guido chapter 12 . 5/26
I really like your version of the 'Voldie in the cauldron' return. So apropos!
Mikeblade chapter 12 . 5/16
so voldy was at the tasks but never did them because he was a parasite riding the back of a minnions head again
Mikeblade chapter 11 . 5/16
this is dumb voldy has had no magic since the first task since by not showing up and not taking part in the task the goblet would have stripped him of his magic. if that did not do it then not showing up and taking part in the 2nd task would have taken his magic for a 2nd time.
this story makes no damn sense at all
Mikeblade chapter 10 . 5/16
oh look voldy did not show up for the task again there is now no damn way he should have any magic at all
Mikeblade chapter 9 . 5/16
ok why does voldy have a body still he never took part in the first task meaning he no longer has any magic meaning his made up baby body would fall apart from no magic to hold it together
Mikeblade chapter 7 . 5/16
will since voldy and peter never showed for the task they no longer have magic any more and voldy baby body should be rotting and falling apart since it's made out of magic and he no longer has any to keep it from falling apart.
Mikeblade chapter 6 . 5/16
wrong the use of any unforgivable is a 100% automatic one way trip to dementor island for life no exceptions
Guest chapter 13 . 5/1
So well done. It straddles that fine line between beautiful writing and crack-fic
hdres chapter 2 . 5/2
Such a funny chapter. The timing of the comments of the officials is hilarious. Thank you for a good laugh
arianamax177 chapter 1 . 2/26
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tie.xiao.wang chapter 13 . 2/21
Well thought out, great meta commentary, and hilarious! I haven't laughed like this in a long time!
thebetawholived chapter 13 . 2/2
. . . Harmony Ranger . . .

laughing out loud!

I love it!
thebetawholived chapter 12 . 2/2
Warningg: spoilers.

I've read "Voldemort draws the magic out of death eaters while he is dying" before. That said, this is unique in several ways: the mistake Crouch Jr made about Harry, having Hermione in the tournament, the location and time of the ritual, and the timing of outside events. In other words, this story is very different from most I've read.

I thoroughly enjoyed it. You have a good mix of description and dialog, and events flow well and naturally. Thank you for sharing this, and I'm going to look if you've written any more!
thebetawholived chapter 10 . 2/1
I can see some thinking that Harry and Hermione should be more suspicious of Moody. But the one I'm suspicious of is Crabbe. He's too competent too quickly, and after all, there is still a contestant who hasn't shown up yet.
rune1806 chapter 13 . 1/27
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
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