Reviews for Angel Down
MiniHerc chapter 3 . 1/1
this chapter was stupid
MrWhitecoal chapter 3 . 10/10/2022
I'm just going to throw this out there now, but this went from a good fic to shit fic in a instant, cortessa is such a boring mary sue mcguffin that its painful to read anything about her winning, the fact everyone thinks she always wins is crap and instantly ruins a good fanfiction whenever she's written in.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/12/2022
This really pissed me off, and killed the sense of agency in this story.

For Taylor to have any real agency you NEED to have Taylor either defeat Contessa, or fight her to a standstill.

Having Contessa win ruins the story.

better to leave her out of it entirely, if you don't want Taylor to win over Contessa.

It is a confrontation you didn't need to have happen.
typo chapter 1 . 4/12/2022
Livsey, not Livesey
AMortePerpetuaLiberaNos chapter 4 . 4/4/2022
You nerfed her power so much and further hindered her potential influence due to her extreme caution that I am honestly unsure why the Simurgh had to die in this story. This is just Taylor with a worse version of Path to Victory and minor telekinesis. Nothing here is really similar to the infamous Hopekiller imo.

Also the description says that Queen Administrator cannibalized Simurgh, but doesn't that mean that she has still bug control? Why is that missing? Her power should have showed that as an option if it still exists.

Overall, I still enjoyed the read and I wish you good luck and much creativity in the future :)
drakiesan chapter 4 . 12/7/2021
How to destroy interesting premise?

Ryo Oh Ki7 chapter 5 . 9/22/2021
Love love love
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2021
Meh, I lost interest after chapter 3. You gave Taylor Simurgh powers then nerfed the shit outta them.
VPSale chapter 5 . 7/4/2021
This is too good to drop, can you update this plz
GreatT'Phon1of4 chapter 5 . 5/8/2021
It is indeed a fix-it fic...if you consider Taylor's actions as 'fixing' the future to a path lol. Either way, the Simurgh is crazy OP even when sandbagging...Taylor's power levels make sense if you factor in her status as a squishy human and relative unfamiliarity with her powers.
GreatT'Phon1of4 chapter 2 . 5/8/2021
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2021
clap...clap...clap...clap...clap...good story...clap...clap...clap...bye
Gtopia chapter 5 . 3/19/2021
bloody brilliant story, wish it was still going.
Kraizy chapter 3 . 2/24/2021
Should have just slit her throat a be done with it.
Lola Smith chapter 4 . 2/5/2021
I like this story but goddamn do I find tattletale annoying.
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