| Reviews for Angel Down |
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   MiniHerc chapter 3 . 1/1 this chapter was stupid |
| MrWhitecoal chapter 3 . 10/10/2022 I'm just going to throw this out there now, but this went from a good fic to shit fic in a instant, cortessa is such a boring mary sue mcguffin that its painful to read anything about her winning, the fact everyone thinks she always wins is crap and instantly ruins a good fanfiction whenever she's written in. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/12/2022 This really pissed me off, and killed the sense of agency in this story. For Taylor to have any real agency you NEED to have Taylor either defeat Contessa, or fight her to a standstill. Having Contessa win ruins the story. better to leave her out of it entirely, if you don't want Taylor to win over Contessa. It is a confrontation you didn't need to have happen. |
| typo chapter 1 . 4/12/2022 Livsey, not Livesey |
| AMortePerpetuaLiberaNos chapter 4 . 4/4/2022 You nerfed her power so much and further hindered her potential influence due to her extreme caution that I am honestly unsure why the Simurgh had to die in this story. This is just Taylor with a worse version of Path to Victory and minor telekinesis. Nothing here is really similar to the infamous Hopekiller imo. Also the description says that Queen Administrator cannibalized Simurgh, but doesn't that mean that she has still bug control? Why is that missing? Her power should have showed that as an option if it still exists. Overall, I still enjoyed the read and I wish you good luck and much creativity in the future :) |
| drakiesan chapter 4 . 12/7/2021 How to destroy interesting premise? NERF EVERYTHING ABOUT MC and BOOST everything about EVIL! Trash... |
| Ryo Oh Ki7 chapter 5 . 9/22/2021 Love love love |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2021 Meh, I lost interest after chapter 3. You gave Taylor Simurgh powers then nerfed the shit outta them. |
| VPSale chapter 5 . 7/4/2021 This is too good to drop, can you update this plz |
| GreatT'Phon1of4 chapter 5 . 5/8/2021 It is indeed a fix-it fic...if you consider Taylor's actions as 'fixing' the future to a path lol. Either way, the Simurgh is crazy OP even when sandbagging...Taylor's power levels make sense if you factor in her status as a squishy human and relative unfamiliarity with her powers. |
| GreatT'Phon1of4 chapter 2 . 5/8/2021 Awesome. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2021 clap...clap...clap...clap...clap...good story...clap...clap...clap...bye |
| Gtopia chapter 5 . 3/19/2021 bloody brilliant story, wish it was still going. |
| Kraizy chapter 3 . 2/24/2021 Should have just slit her throat a be done with it. |
| Lola Smith chapter 4 . 2/5/2021 I like this story but goddamn do I find tattletale annoying. |