Reviews for Le Fox Den: Chef-nin Naruto and the Taimanin |
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Ace of Hate chapter 5 . 11/10/2024 Looking forward to more Taimanin stuff in the upcoming chapters. |
StarWarsFan1999 chapter 5 . 8/28/2024 Dude. what tok so long? this chapter is pretty good. However, it has come few years after i cared about this story. if you're that mentally exhausted then go get some help. don't wait 3 years to update. |
Ryu wolf chapter 5 . 5/27/2024 Kaguya is going to destroy edwen if naruto doesn’t obliterate him first. Plus, id like to see how asagi’s inner lilithher demon side). Desls when it meets kitsune nsruto and kushina. |
K. M. Donovan chapter 3 . 3/31/2024 for me, it's not so much a rape fetish, personally that part is a turn off. it's more the speed of the "Action" and the sheer sizes in some scenes. those are the aspects i like from the Taimanin series. i often have to ignore the dialogue completely to get any kind of enjoyment out of the content. though i also feel that outside of certain "Adult" entertainment, the Taimanin series and it's characters are woefully underused. the series has some solid lore and a compelling universe. the characters are surprisingly deep as well. so yeah, i do not begrudge you using the Taimanin series at all. |
Heroman636 chapter 5 . 3/19/2024 Amazing as always. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
Dragonman110 chapter 5 . 2/27/2024 I'm looking forwards to the next chapter when it's ready for uploading. |
Mnchblackname chapter 5 . 1/22/2024 joder que increible cap¡ |
Mnchblackname chapter 1 . 1/21/2024 oye wow, simplemente wow |
AadenHelan chapter 5 . 1/14/2024 i don't see the point why you even bother return to write this shit |
CoffeeAficionado1 chapter 5 . 1/5/2024 Just binged this, really like the restaurant route. Way more slice of life stuff can happen. Good seeing all the trouble the can get up to. Please take the following items as constructive criticism though, story is great I can just see a few points that may help: A. As the Doctor likes to say, timelines are a bit wibbly wobbly. One chapter had wives be pregnant while another chapter acted like it was the future but based on comments for the voyeur in the room seemed to be the past. I don’t think you should put dates in as that ties you down more, however maybe just use the good old fashioned “flashback no jutsu” more. Not a big fan of them, however it beats trying to figure out timelines. 2. While I can see sometimes it helps, there were points in the story where it was told from the perspective of someone from another universe. The whole comments by Naruko (with a K) opened up a lot of confusion. Omniverse/Mutiverse stuff always gets confusing when we don’t have a frame of reference. d. Please hold off on additional genderbending. There are enough ladies in said worlds that don’t get screentime, why add more. You have at minimum three worlds merged, and Naruto alone had anywhere from 10 to 15 women that were ambiguous at best who the hooked up with if any. Again, just my two (okay three) cents. Take it as you want and hopefully tou continue. Enjoy the new year. |
Crimson Riot 01 chapter 5 . 1/4/2024 Gracias por la experiencia, me da un poco de cringe las escenas del shokugeki pero siguen siendo buenas |
Crimson Riot 01 chapter 4 . 1/4/2024 Espero mas omakes |
Crimson Riot 01 chapter 3 . 1/4/2024 Esto es fantastivo |
Crimson Riot 01 chapter 2 . 1/4/2024 Super cool Me encanta |
Crimson Riot 01 chapter 1 . 1/4/2024 Super cool, me ha encantado, recién coloco mis revisiones, pero ten por seguro que solo son de apoyo, ya termine de leer tus primeros 5 capitulos y espero con muchas ansias las proximas actualizaciones Eres el mejor |