Reviews for All is revealed
Kiluca1228 chapter 4 . 7/25/2010
Hey update soon please try and put up longe chapters .. :)
M. D. Jensen chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
it's pretty short but it's good. poor Fred and George...
Legends of Wind and Time chapter 4 . 7/4/2003
Great chapter! You captured the perfect character of Mrs. Weasley with her usual shrieking! I can't wait for more!
Legends of Wind and Time chapter 3 . 5/19/2003
I definitely agree with Harry... Ron has gone insane! Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
xxxIIIxxx chapter 3 . 5/18/2003
It's good so far but really short. I guess thats okay but other then that it's good. Also I really don't think Ron would be happy about his two brothers dying. I mean that's just a bit OOC there. Anyways keep it up! Oh and check out my fanfic! Harry Potter and The Reincarnation!
randomLore chapter 3 . 5/18/2003
To be honest, it really is too short. Granted, my own needs a little (cough- a lot) more work, but you need some description, details, thoughts, and stuff like that. It does have a really good plot line but many holes; how'd they die, where, did anyone see them, was anyone to blame, and questions like that should be answered. But All is definetely not lost; work on fleshing out the original characters, descriptions and feelings, and it'll be right on track. Good luck!
Legends of Wind and Time chapter 2 . 5/18/2003
Poor Heather... What had she done to deserve such suffering? Anyway, great chapter! I'll be sure to read your future chapters. I can't wait 'till you update! PLEASE read and review my story! ("The Fate of the Children", also a HP fanfic)
Legends of Wind and Time chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
It really doesn't matter if it is short. In fact it's very good so far! Update soon! Could you please read my story called "The Fate of the Children"? Thanks...