Reviews for A Precise Note |
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SparrowTheThird chapter 6 . 7/10/2023 I'm glad I saw you updated. Rereading your work has been an absolute treat and you remain, to this day, my favorite author of all time. |
Kingz T. Infinity chapter 14 . 7/6/2023 Not dissing, came back due to the profile update (I love your content and missed your work, so I’ll be buying those books thank you very much) and I find it hilarious that it been ~3 years, and when I decide to reread the final chapter, the last three words are “just three years” lol. The timing was nearly perfect |
Omnireceptacle chapter 1 . 7/6/2023 Holy shit, you updated your profile? Are you back? Either fanfics or books man, if you're back I'm pretty much the happiest man alive |
Fuck off chapter 1 . 6/16/2023 Ah yes, let's just paper over a decade of bullying immediately in chapter 1 with nothing said at all... People call you an edgelord because you don't understand how humans work. This is terrible. |
Emerald Rose nee Potter chapter 14 . 6/17/2023 Its a shame this story hasn't been updated in ages. Its a brilliant story. Way different to any other story I've seen. Love it, Denki using Killuas technique is an awesome idea I've not seen before either. This is fairly well written and very interesting. I do hope you continue this at some point. |
Mernom chapter 14 . 6/17/2023 I like this version of Kaminari. Lightning is an amazing power, and I feel his Canon self didn't do it justice. You really manged to up the quality of the students of 1A. If even Bakugo feels like a medium fish. |
Mernom chapter 12 . 6/17/2023 I like this competent Tomura. |
Mernom chapter 2 . 6/16/2023 That's a very interesting way to have a character with fixation in 18 stuff while keeping things 'tasteful', shall we say. |
haztendencia chapter 1 . 6/11/2023 I love it. Izuku's quirk felt way too overpowered at the start but now I'm seeing how it's not all that good when compared to the rest of the quirks. Well done on the reveal and execution |
onemancavalry chapter 1 . 6/10/2023 Hello. I'm a fan of this fanfic. It is really well-thought. I hope you continue writing this, author-san. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/6/2023 stuttering is annoying to read please fix the problem |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2023 stuttering is annoying |
Guest chapter 14 . 5/12/2023 Can I perhaps continue the fanfic? |
guata chapter 14 . 4/30/2023 you are the best writer in existwnce |
CyrusWolfricFaust81194 chapter 7 . 4/30/2023 Wait... If he can make any bodily function precise... How about making the transmission of information through synapses and his recording of it (like the brain structures that result in eidetic or photographic memory) perfectly precise? He'd never forget again. Why not just make it so that the length and structure of his telomeres never change; remain precisely as they are... or even edit them to give retroactive benefits? That alone is instantaneous eternal youth. If he could edit the telomere and DNA of certain cells of each type completely and control his immune system not to attack them, while simultaneously taking in a large amount of nutrients and increasing the pace of cell generation and degeneration while precisely replacing them with the altered cells alone... Provided it doesn't change his quirk, he could turn himself into an entirely new person altogether... And that's just the disguise potential. What if, with eternal youth in the picture, he could modify his body towards accelerated evolution, or even devolution? Modify his lungs to be able to filter oxygen out of water, regress his evolution enough to make his feet prehensile like certian apes, enhance his eyesight akin to a bee and gain ultraviolet vision, enhance his digestive system so that he can diegst, store and utilise a 100% of consumed matter, gain a bird of prey's enhanced eyesight, a hummingbird's ability to process information at speed, even things like a new set of limbs: grow fur, bat-like wings, a tail, the ability to molt like a snake, store energy as a new easily convertible high energy fluid that can be mixed into the blood without issue? If the O concentration in the atmosphere doubled, isnects would gigantify insects and birds, who would fly lower and have different dietary needs... So what if he modified his body precisely so that he could breathe nitrogen instead of oxygen? And then further improved it by making it completely precise? |