Reviews for Storm Princess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() dont worry about chapter length we just want quality not quantity |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm gonna be as honest and blunt as possible, GET BACK HERE AND CONTINUE THIS STORY BEFORE I HAVE A MELT DOWN. Thank you for letting say that now I'm going to find a corner and cry because I'm laughing to damn hard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. Get rid of Jane if she's jealous of little Evie. Evie had to deal with Lily's petty, jealous sister. There is no need for little Evie to deal with a petty, jealous wannabe stepmother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great chapter to a fantastic story. Hoping to read more sometime soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() 150 million….. you smoking crack? I can understand 100k-500k maybe.. maybe by some act of god 1-2 million dollars. NYC is expensive after all. But you can buy a damn large house for 150 million even in NYC… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, I need to know if you will continue this fic, it is perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I got American Dragon Jake Long vibes from her saying the phrase Ah man. |
![]() ![]() Length of the chapter doesn’t matter to me. It was worth the wait, and I agree with you that Natasha would be better off paired with Thor. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the update! I love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I HOPE YOUR MUSE COMES SOON. I HATE JANE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. The conversation between Daniel,tony and jean was nice. It is wonderful that Tony offered the grangers to practice in stark industries. I loved how Loki is observing everything. Thor and Natasha will indeed make a wonderful couple. It is nice that Natasha also loved Evie. Jane needs to realise that she does not belong here. |
![]() ![]() Awesome fanfic Evelyn is so cute and sweet when she goes to hogwarts she should be in hufflepuff and hermione should be in raven claw or in hufflepuff with evie and only Minerva Severus flitwick sprout and pomfrey should know evie is asgards princess so they can help her if needed Thor and Loki will be the ones to reveal that fact to the hogwarts staff and to keep it a secret from dumbledore |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the update! I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo hooo Loki being Loki even he sees Nat and Thor love eachother she’s basically lily but with guns and better survival instincts instead of the whole let’s run upstairs away from snakeface not like out the back door over a fence |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kinda hope Jane just drops out of the story, I like her overall character from the comics and such so her being written like this is uncomfortable for me. Otherwise a good if short chapter. Loki shipping Nat with Thor is definitely new for me but it seems like a fun ship. |