Keep it coming please it is good

Khan, Hitler, and Trump lumped together I whole heartedly agree

i love this story ;.; hope it continues!

This story started out well. It has a good plot and is well written. Unfortunately you destroyed all that was good as soon as you started to involve your veiw on politics in chapter 2. As soon as you did that I quit reading and started this review. I would recommend that in your writings in the future that you avoid any topic that is controversial. Theis topics only drive reades that don't agree with you away and do nothing to bring you other readers.

Very enjoyable story here.
I do hope you continue it at some point.
Thanks for writing what you have though.
May life treat you and yours well.

Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Great story!

I think this would be the perfect time for the Magical Calvary to arrive to help Harry out! BUT you are the author and have your vision on how this will go! Either way, I really like this story!

dennisud

Oh Harry is fitting in alright... at this rate he'll have a shrine in his name

Tx

-falls over laughing- work a holic boomer XD

Did harry find a different battlestar, its hard to follow

lol, Orange man bad! What a fucking joke.

Hey could harry theoretically tlcreate a ship from blueprints?

sloppy, your harry's power levels are all over the place, seemingly going from overpowered to about fall unconscious within moments. He's tired and short on magic but can still pop over to other ships daily to visit orphans and on and on.

okay idea, not good execution though.

Trump ?