I want more - what happens next ..great story thanks for sharing ..have fun

I have read this story many times, I always come back to it when I need some comfort. And no matter how many times I’ve read it and even though I know the ending, I still find myself unable to put it down. It’s so messy, dirty, beautiful, heartbreaking and lovely, and just perfect. I want so much more of these 2 beautiful people, want more for them. Thank you for sharing them with us.

Por qué eres una imbecil bella que no se mueve que no habla si no cuando ya es tarde. Me desespera

Bella es tan ridículamente dramática que me fastidia

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in the beginning of the story he was dating victoria and now it’s tanya? must be a typo but still annoying lol

I can see why this was your favourite chapter. I like the Bella POV too.

I can’t get past thinking how much water they wasted crying in the shower. You shouldn’t waste water.

I ask the same thing: why do you let him? Have some self respect, woman. ;)

There is too much word ”fuck” in this story. Instead of being hot it’s annoying.

This was so good! I didn't want it to end.

Finally, now they will live Happily Ever After!

That went well, but she just kept walking * pouts *

Just walk up and say Hi, and go from there.

Yeah yeah, strong apart, stronger together… let’s get them together then ;)