| Reviews for Death's Chosen |
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   Devastator21 chapter 6 . 6/19 I've only finished chapter 6 but you sometimes repeat yourself in dialogue it's like you combined two drafts together but forgot to go over it still I am enjoying the story but you should proofread or something. |
| tleetlee1234 chapter 1 . 3/27 The moment I see issei is still stick to his canon version….. I have already clicked favorite and follow instantly. |
| Velvety6 chapter 4 . 2/18 Spider man into the spider verse reference XD |
| Skull chapter 7 . 12/6/2023 I am here to thank you for that hello from cake I think I am in heven right now |
| romanian.theif chapter 1 . 11/12/2023 instant favorite holy shit |
| Daku Shirosaki chapter 32 . 10/15/2023 Ngl I've binge read your story and I love it everytime I re-read it's very entertaining and amazing. You are probably one of the who would change Issei in some way, and still let him perverted nature. And I absolutely love on how you made Balthazar. I always thought of Dragons to be prideful and proud creatures, but not all that much. They can be compassionate as well. Plus I really love laid back Balthazar is as well, and how much of a bro he is to Iessi. Overall I absolutely this story, this story has a lot of impact on me. Please, I hope you get back on this story, it is truly an amazing story. I seriously can't get over it. |
| ahsoei chapter 18 . 10/14/2023 Which girl's soul that Death was holding in Disneyland again? |
| KINGShaheed chapter 32 . 8/10/2023 Binged this through the entire week, at work no less. Let's just say this bomb ass story is the reason I'm slacking lol. Fantastic chapter and an amazing story so far. Lots to explore and I can't wait to see it! |
| KINGShaheed chapter 29 . 8/9/2023 You are indeed biased and Death is indeed cool as fuck, don't worry I am biased too. Also loved this little thing Issei and Tamamo got going on. Dare I say she’s my favorite -waifu?- so far. Ugh, I'm never using the term waifu again… |
| KINGShaheed chapter 27 . 8/9/2023 Ahh damn, this story is beyond stellar. Maybe Death wrote it? Lol. |
| KINGShaheed chapter 23 . 8/9/2023 Death is definitely my favorite character in this, a bit more than Balthazar and Issei (he has really grown and matured, amazing!), and it's interesting how you said Death’s embrace was gentle, more than anything. That was a great line! |
| KINGShaheed chapter 22 . 8/9/2023 These chapters are Stellar! Enjoying this a lot! |
| KINGShaheed chapter 19 . 8/9/2023 Good stuff lol |
| KINGShaheed chapter 11 . 8/8/2023 Damn didn't expect that… good job issei! And I agree, boobs do indeed taste lewd! |
| KINGShaheed chapter 11 . 8/8/2023 Issei seriously has some learning and maturing to do, jumping headfirst into something like being a servant. Seriously… He needs to think about the ramifications of what he is saying. He's got a heart of gold, I know. Balthazar is right though, this is just 100% stupid. Well, that's what development is for, and I'm excited to see that! Hopefully, it comes sooner rather than later, though... Also, that is some new levels of simping, I'm disappointed, lol. Is this what it's like to be a femboy’s dad..? Luckily it worked out in the end for Issei’s favor. He isn't a slave to anyone (excluding Death), thank God! |