Reviews for Twins |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I wish there was more of this. Could you make this into a larger story? Regardless, thanks for the great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Appreciate it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cute. Good job! I wish more writers used the Carrie twins. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear author I need more of these 2 girls and their interactions with Harry please write more. I would so love to see them in yr 5 and 6 too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. Excellent job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg this was so sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Moar, dammit, give us moar! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't see the Carrow Twins often, nice. Had an idea with them myself, haven't had time to write it though. Might make time after reading this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great one shot. You did a good job in introducing them and then exploring not just their dynamic but their evolving friendship/relationship with Harry. Getting it all from his POV was a treat especially the small things he'd notice or react to. I wouldn't be surprised if they'd help him with the follow up tasks in the tournament. It would also make me wonder by the time of the second task if they would be who Harry would miss most. Thanks for the energy and time you've put into writing this. -Spectre4hire |
![]() ![]() ![]() nicely done.. i too would like to see more of this.. even though its a one-shot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. Hope to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done! Ever since Slughorn's party in the Half Blood Prince movie, I've wondered how there wasn't at least a subplot involving Harry and the Carrow twins. It seems so obvious, and the characters were so innocent at the time, no one would have objected, surely! Anyway, good writing, imaginative plot, and a big 'Good on ya' to Harry, Flora and Hestia for knowing what they want and going for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would really, really, really like it if you would continue this story, or rework it into something a bit longer. It's really good. That is all. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you made the characteristic of the twins. Kinda weird but also nice and awkward. Hope to see more of them in the future. |