Reviews for Twins
Anime Aikouka chapter 1 . 6/4/2020
This is great! I wish there was more of this. Could you make this into a larger story? Regardless, thanks for the great read!
AragornII chapter 1 . 6/3/2020
Appreciate it...
TubfullOfDishes345 chapter 1 . 6/1/2020
This was cute. Good job! I wish more writers used the Carrie twins.
narutoDkurosaki chapter 1 . 5/30/2020
Dear author I need more of these 2 girls and their interactions with Harry please write more. I would so love to see them in yr 5 and 6 too.
sondrex76 chapter 1 . 5/30/2020
Interesting fanfic.
ghaisdlkfns chapter 1 . 5/25/2020
Brilliant. Excellent job.
Foxy Engineer chapter 1 . 5/24/2020
Omg this was so sweet
Time313 chapter 1 . 5/23/2020
Moar, dammit, give us moar!
JakOvsumTrade chapter 1 . 5/21/2020
Don't see the Carrow Twins often, nice. Had an idea with them myself, haven't had time to write it though. Might make time after reading this.
spectre4hire chapter 1 . 5/21/2020
This was a great one shot.

You did a good job in introducing them and then exploring not just their dynamic but their evolving friendship/relationship with Harry. Getting it all from his POV was a treat especially the small things he'd notice or react to.

I wouldn't be surprised if they'd help him with the follow up tasks in the tournament. It would also make me wonder by the time of the second task if they would be who Harry would miss most.

Thanks for the energy and time you've put into writing this.

-Spectre4hire
Dragon-bait-2001 chapter 1 . 5/20/2020
nicely done.. i too would like to see more of this.. even though its a one-shot
ghostwarrior2301 chapter 1 . 5/19/2020
Excellent story. Hope to see more
Bfd1235813 chapter 1 . 5/19/2020
Well done! Ever since Slughorn's party in the Half Blood Prince movie, I've wondered how there wasn't at least a subplot involving Harry and the Carrow twins. It seems so obvious, and the characters were so innocent at the time, no one would have objected, surely! Anyway, good writing, imaginative plot, and a big 'Good on ya' to Harry, Flora and Hestia for knowing what they want and going for it.
BrotherToBattle chapter 1 . 5/18/2020
I would really, really, really like it if you would continue this story, or rework it into something a bit longer. It's really good. That is all. 3
ChinRa chapter 1 . 5/15/2020
I love how you made the characteristic of the twins. Kinda weird but also nice and awkward. Hope to see more of them in the future.
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