Reviews for Twins |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story, You left it off at the perfect spot, pretty much ideal for a one shot. I loved seeing the stilted interactions between those two and Harry, absolutely adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never knew that I needed that in my life. Now I know. Superb story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely a threesome here. But the date was awesome, very funny how they just interact, straightforward like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a delightful plot idea, perfectly executed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A most interesting story, I can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this alot. Wish it was multi-chaptered but I can live sith a one-shot. |
![]() ![]() This needs to be a full length multi chapter story, definitely the best rare pairing one shot I’ve ever read on here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this one as well! You did a bang up job bringing Flora and Hestia to life. This really needs to be continued as well. Love all of the attention to detail such as the knives and the twins' love for dangerous creatures. And you managed to do a great job crafting Harry so he didn't seem out of character, but still allowed the twins entry into his life. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness! These Carrows are the best! They stole the show. You made them so vivid. I could totally picture them as I was reading. I'd absolutely read a multi hundred K words story about this. It was fantastic. Thanks for writing and I hope this may one day become more than a one shot. best wishes. Ta. |
![]() ![]() This is so cute! Squee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jan 6 c1 1redHussar Very cute in Addams Family way. Does it make sense? Anyway, it was a cool story. Ditto, thought of twin Wednesdays Adams. Regarding reviews begging for sequel etcetera: As a "public persona" (fits like a glove with "Hestia gasped. "We're in public!" "; ie. public impression, public mask, confident BAMF witches), the cold semi zombie demeanor is a bit thin for a longer story(or sequel). Although there's strong hints of more passionate side, and while obliviation seems a bit ruthless, perhaps it's showing cracks in the facade, vulnerbility & fear of exposing unrequited romantic interest... While one can imagine, the cold emotionless mask is removed in private. For any sequel or novel size similar story, I think when in private, wholly near opposite personas would be needed to be interesting. Nice mix of details in a fast compact (one shot) delivery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really want this as a full story it's to cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no i want more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha. This was great. Hilarious and quirky, just the way I like it! |
![]() ![]() bon chapitre |