Reviews for Null
The Jingo chapter 25 . 5/21
I really think you oversell how "dangerous" Jaune's semblance is. All it does is cancel out the magic and put everyone on an even playing field.

Anyone who is a trained combatant and knows what to expect going up against him should be able to easily blow his brains out.
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 39 . 5/10
honestly? Mid story. I won't lie and say Coeur is a masterful writer, but this just feels rushed, even for him. All of Coeur's story's are rushed at the end, I've accepted that. but this is ridiculous.
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 28 . 5/10
"Jaune would have to deal with guilt of killing after his anger fades away" no he wouldn't? He's become a hardened killer, maybe he'd feel remorse, but not regret or guilt. He only felt it for those two hunters that one time and even then it never affected him until recently.
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 28 . 5/10
Deus Ex Machina is a Deus Ex Machina why is she still alive. Jaune is far from an amateur, we spent the last few chapters of him clearing out entire facilities of soldiers and scientists by himself.
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 27 . 5/10
"SUFFER AS I HAVE" blud thinks he's Ramattra
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 27 . 5/10
that's some bull shit fucking plot bro omg
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 26 . 5/10
I'm praying so hard for a happy ending man
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 25 . 5/10
Please don't let this happen
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 25 . 5/10
Please for the love of God bro. don't do this.
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 7 . 5/9
Blake is such a red flag. That doctor deserved what happened to him.
TheCynicalCriticfromWtP chapter 7 . 5/9
This is dark bro. like really fucking dark.
guest chapter 44 . 4/30
Holy shit. I don't tend to review but fuck, this story was.. Draining? I'm not sure. I felt muted reading the whole thing - then pissed at characters like Ozpin and Blake. I initially read because of how Null acted in Arc Royale, but goddamn, I can see why. Reading this and relic in the same week has made my Ozpin dislike a lot worse, but also, I've never really cared for him. Overall 8/10, i guess?
GhostRonin chapter 3 . 4/25
Hope this doesn’t evolve into a Ilia and Lavender relationship it feels like every story Ilia is in she’s forced into a relationship
What a ride chapter 44 . 4/16
What a ride! This was a great pulp thriller. Well written!

Null was a proper protagonist for this kind of adventure.

I admit I thought Amber and Neo were to be the next adventurers after the end.

Genre: Revenge, action, espionage, sci-fi, fantasy
WwEpsilonwW chapter 44 . 4/4
So basically, Jaune suffers A LOT, kills everyone, and is now Atlas' Anti-hero. The end? ... Eh, whatever. 10/10 as usual Mr. Coeur.
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