all i have to say is 10/10

Genuinely, I don’t usually post a review on fanfics, mostly because I don’t have much to say besides ‘I enjoy it’, and for the most part I’m just a silent supporter with the Favorite story button.

But god fucking dammit Couer. I picked this up cause I fed arc royale and decided I should read Null to see why he was so different and just-

Great fucking story, loved it, adored it, fuck you and your disclaimer in chapter one, I don’t think you have a darker story than this one.

I hate literal jitters and shakes just because of how much icky feelings in my tum tum I had going on that I could not physically stop shaking. You GAVE ME ANXIETY. I DON’T SUFFER ANXIETY!

Fan-fucking-tastic. Genuinely.

I could follow with many more exhaled curses and the like, but thank you for the story as always Couer. I’ll fear for my heart and blood pressure

A summary I made to congratulate this story.

Are there no lines that exist to stop people from commiting unforgivable acts in the name of success? Is it even worth causing tragedy after tragedy if the hope for a brighter future is ensured? The ones who suffer for it are left changed for the worst, with very little chance of them recovering. But amogst all the broken messes, there is one who refuses to lay down and accept their fate. With newfound resolve, they set their sights on those who have wronged them, and make sure that they do not go unpunished, uncaring with what damage they cause along the way. So those people had better watch out, for their end could be arriving sooner than they think.

WOW

also, nice omake at the end

okay now that im done reading i am happy to say i was wrong, your morals were not bleeding into your writing, your message in story is perfect and reasonable and has completely satisfied me, all the hypocritical characters were proven to be so and had satisfactory repercussions for their hypocrisy. over all if you're okay with super dark themes just short of overt SA and reading about the darkness of humanity and our own world then this is a very good read

so jaune trusted blakeand she fkd him... really hope your write consequences for her bs

'jaune would be brought to justice no matter how justifiable his actions were' sighh im going with feh theory that You're writing in the form of an unreliable narrator because how else can every character be such a hypocrite

why is everyone in this fic fine wifh people dying as long as it's not their friends?and why are you writing it in a way that feels like your on their side?

dude wth, the theme you're going with sucks, you're writing in a way that makes me feel like ots wrong to kll people that want my life, i really hope fhe theme changes soon because this sucks

i Greatly dislike the premise of this fic, that is it's wrong to kll, especially when you show me ghe darkest elements of humanity, you can't keep trying to convince me that it's wrong to change and be less merciful when subjected go such conditions, and that is what you seem to be doing, as of now Blake somehow has the gall to tell Jaune what he should and shouldn't do because 'killing is wrong' this is normal because your characters each have their own motivations and morals but it feels liek yours are bleeding into your writing, even in the synopsis, will jaune fall into inhumanity? i Greatly resent the premise that him repaying these antagonists with what they're doing is inhuman and makes you just as bad as them, it's a rather hypocritical concept

It took 6 hrs to read didn't get done till 11pm, have to wake up at 3Am to go to work. Do I regret it no, the story was phenomenal Jaune was really put to the wringer on this one.

obviously I know it won't happen but id love a short series about ironwoods cloak and dagger ops with neo and null

we need a omake, where jaune continues to mess with blake. Her pov where she continues to spot jaune standing places looking at her (Micheal Myers style), never for long and where no one else see him (thanks neo).

In my mind, this is Cinder's canon motivation. She was abused and mistreated and when she defends herself and kills those abusing her, she is treated like a villain by someone she trusted to look out for her. There is no justice other than what you make and no power other than what you take. This story is probably the best representation of Cinder's motivation, canon included, and she's barely a side character.