I really think you oversell how "dangerous" Jaune's semblance is. All it does is cancel out the magic and put everyone on an even playing field.

Anyone who is a trained combatant and knows what to expect going up against him should be able to easily blow his brains out.

honestly? Mid story. I won't lie and say Coeur is a masterful writer, but this just feels rushed, even for him. All of Coeur's story's are rushed at the end, I've accepted that. but this is ridiculous.

"Jaune would have to deal with guilt of killing after his anger fades away" no he wouldn't? He's become a hardened killer, maybe he'd feel remorse, but not regret or guilt. He only felt it for those two hunters that one time and even then it never affected him until recently.

Deus Ex Machina is a Deus Ex Machina why is she still alive. Jaune is far from an amateur, we spent the last few chapters of him clearing out entire facilities of soldiers and scientists by himself.

"SUFFER AS I HAVE" blud thinks he's Ramattra

that's some bull shit fucking plot bro omg

I'm praying so hard for a happy ending man

Please don't let this happen

Please for the love of God bro. don't do this.

Blake is such a red flag. That doctor deserved what happened to him.

This is dark bro. like really fucking dark.

Holy shit. I don't tend to review but fuck, this story was.. Draining? I'm not sure. I felt muted reading the whole thing - then pissed at characters like Ozpin and Blake. I initially read because of how Null acted in Arc Royale, but goddamn, I can see why. Reading this and relic in the same week has made my Ozpin dislike a lot worse, but also, I've never really cared for him. Overall 8/10, i guess?

Hope this doesn’t evolve into a Ilia and Lavender relationship it feels like every story Ilia is in she’s forced into a relationship

What a ride! This was a great pulp thriller. Well written!

Null was a proper protagonist for this kind of adventure.

I admit I thought Amber and Neo were to be the next adventurers after the end.

Genre: Revenge, action, espionage, sci-fi, fantasy

So basically, Jaune suffers A LOT, kills everyone, and is now Atlas' Anti-hero. The end? ... Eh, whatever. 10/10 as usual Mr. Coeur.