Looking amazing so far, Can not wait for more!

Very unimpressed that daichi has to use talismans to teleport, instead of his own power. Sure, for the big group portal it makes perfect sense. And sure, I'd personally be happy if I had teleport talismans. But he should be better than that by now, it's just lazy.

You mean to tell me he hasn't created a personal pocket space? He should have just popped that sacred gear extractor in his dimensional storage.

Honestly, that whole thing with the seed felt like it might have been more appropriate for the seventh tail, what with the whole "qualitative change" you've been talking up. When I read it was a five year time skip, and he still only had five tails, I could only think that he must have just been sitting on his ass that whole time, to not have his sixth tail already.

I guess I'll give the story a 4 star overall. It was fairly interesting with some unique points, but overall the story was just kind of boring. It's basically just training and timeskips with multiple scenes hinting at future relationships that never come to pass.

I find it kind of hard to believe that this story has a 'Romance' genre at all. The romance part was really disappointing and it would be more accurate to put the 'Friendship' genre tag. There was no real build-up with any of them past the point of being 'good friends' (no sexual relations at all and only one kiss the entire story).

The one person he DID go further than kissing with was Rias, whom he tied up bondage style, for teleporting into his room or something, completely nude. Still, he didn't fuck her even when she asked him to (to get out of the engagement to Riser) and eventually turned down an engagement with her so he clearly wanted her to be with Issei for some reason. Overall, just very disappointing on the romance.

Why the fuck is he doing this? I thought I liked this since the Author had no qualms with derailing Canon but now it seems that the MC is just following Canon. He literally volunteered to train her peerage for no reason at all and didn't even fuck any of them?!

I just don't understand what is happening.

If he was going to claim Rias and her peerage for his own, why would he let Issei join them (knowing what happened in Canon)?

If he ISN'T going to claim them and just leave them for Issei, why is he bothering helping or interfering in their affairs at all? His deal with Sirzechs and Serafall would only cover threats to the city, not training Rias' peerage for nothing.

Why would he even care about Riser at all if he wasn't going to claim Rias? He's basically just starting trouble for no reason if that's the case.

On another note, why is he still a virgin? Isn't he like 17 or so now? With his looks and personality, he should have gotten laid already. Is he holding out until he becomes a full blown God/Satan before having sex? That's just ridiculous.

He's letting Issei get in Rias' peerage still? Is he planning on claiming Rias and her peerage though? If he is, why would he let that pervert anywhere near them, knowing what happened in Canon?

Not gonna lie, that fight was kind of...disappointing. Nearly a decade of nonstop training with a mastery of Senjutsu and Touki, a good grasp of Nordic Runes, usable Youjutsu, and even a divine spark and it took him that long to take down a near mindless beast? That's kind of...pathetic. If he doesn't have anything to deal with the sheer size of his enemies, he should just train with a weapon or something. (*cough* BOW *cough*)

Not even being High Class level after so many years is pretty annoying, but I can deal with it as long as you nerf everyone like you stated in the review comments. As long as the main cast is also nerfed, then I don't really mind that much. If the MC ends up anywhere NEAR the main cast in levels of power...it will be pretty damn annoying. He should be MUCH stronger than them.

As far as the AN goes, I really hope MC is much stronger than Rias' peerage. It would be pretty dumb for someone with his knowledge, genetic background (son of a GOD), and amount of training time (YEARS) to not completely outclass Rias and her peerage.

I hope this doesn't end up being 'oh he's strong but still outclassed by these devil teenagers that have only trained for about a year due to their "ridiculous advantages"' (of which, Daichi should also have). Please don't cater to the reviewers' NEED for all MCs to be weaker than the Canon protagonists.

Bruh that’s pathetic excuse for him not gaining the boosted gear cmon. Stop trying to make him such a bitch bro :/

Why is it when I finally find a brilliant story, its always been abandoned but Trash story keep going on forever

Update?

The fact you know rias is bust is crazy (what is akeno’s?)