Reviews for Unique |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a very fun read, all tho i found the first 10 chapters a bit slow everything started to pick up from there. |
![]() ![]() You had a great story, and then you forced yourself to conform to canon. This was just a rehash fic in disguise. It's a real shame. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way you did the character Asia she is so stronger than Canon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really annoying forced following canon. At first he became a nanny, but it can still be understood because the plot literally spinning around Rias. It annoys, but forgiven. But now Issey learned the "cramping of clothes", seriously? He literally could not learn it himself, Asia helped him for this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just hope that the "main characters" will not develop as in anime. That is, too fast and practically effortless. That would be infinitely annoyed me with an obvious outcome. I want to say that the growth of MS smooth, but he literally trained his whole life. Literally from birth. And if Issy received LVL UP after 7 days of small effort, and then again ... and in the end it will become stronger. It just destroys any logic you are trying to build. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Isn't she 200 years old? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why just do not do them viciously broken? This is not anime, but the "real" world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eww a story for virgins |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really great story so far it kinda reminds me of Naruto chimera effect which sadly never finished. But overall good pacing you could of went a little slower so it stuck more in people's heads and you could of sprinkled a little more lore/character/relationship progress. There are some other thing I want to ask but I'm going to wait till next chapter till then have a nice one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking finally!, found an author that writes SI stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im kinda excited to see how Daichi’s power grows as he gets more more tails |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehehe hope you dive further into the Church time next chapter we barely know anything about it though I love that he's annoying to both Irina and Xenovia |
![]() ![]() ![]() would the Celts dislike him? I assumed at least the Fae would like any prankster by default and the earthly fox would probably fit right in with the unseely bastards hell he even likes hunting the wild Hunt is right there all wild-y and Hunt-y |
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