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Damn I caught up.

So ahhh more please

Glad to see that plot hole fixed up nice and bloody

Brutal just the way I like it

Good stuff so far, I do love that none of the conversations are stilted and dull.

protecc that smile!

Hahaha you pull out a force training there

You're back!

I demand an immediate update to this intriguingly amazing story my talented author!

SPOILERSHoly jamoli Daichi essentially just Crucio’d Riser!

I like the pacing so far, although it is a little awkward reading a six year old playing with nipples... I know he's mentally like 35 or something but still...

the tone changed pretty fast from the last chapter to this one. in the beginning it was pretty wholesome and gave a picture that loved dearly but never fell in love.

Now we have a fox who seems to not want to be a fox and sees a story he read to be allowed to be as depraved to be as said story's MC (Issei).

I realize that a lot he said was from his Yako side but I hope he gets that under control because nothing breaks a story faster than it becoming a women-collectar story instead of him actually forming a bond with said women...

I kind of hope he will be more comfortable in his fox form instead of his human form, as it isn't really done before and the MC actually has a reason for having an animal form...

Thanks for the chapter!
Man, it's great to see Asia as a fighting force... With her Sacred Gear, she is a Paladin in the make, with all the healing she can do.
I hope you update more this story... It's really good!

Thanks for the chapter!
MAN, THIS CHAPTER WAS SO PLEASING!
Really, everything was well thought!
The battle against the Phenex, the fight against Naberius, the thoughts behind every act...
It was really great!